Reviews for Lethal to Virtue
twistedcoincidence chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
i love the inner dialogue :) and love that she's at least attempting to resist.

can't wait for more...
secamimom chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
Loved it! I love hearing the thoughts that run through both their minds. can't wait for more!
Navarre chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
This CockWard cracks me up. I swear if I did not know any better, I would say his cock is talking while his face is in his pants being a ventriliquist. Lol.

I hope Edward has a harder and harder time hearing Bella. I was hoping her thoughts would be silent to him, maybe she can learn to silence them after awhile and become immune to his touch.

This story is crazy good! Look forward to the arrival of Jake. That should be interesting. :D

Really enjoyed this chapter.
No one-liners. *shrugs*
gbasjw chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
Hopefully, Jake will be able to ding Edward's confidence a bit...maybe just a teeny bit? Maybe not, it's a wonder the boy's ego fits in one room! Seems like Bella's pretty sharp so I'm thinking ultimately she'll be able to give him a run for the money...can't wait to see that!
edward4life1 chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
great chapter
raina31 chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
Pulling the ole V-card, huh? Perfect!

Only able to read her thoughts when he is touching her skin to skin...very nice.

Now if only Bella can turn the tables and actually read his thoughts reciprocally...priceless.

Edward is such a freaking sexual predator! I really hope that Bella busts his balls good. He so needs to be brought back down a notch and not just let her be a notch in his post...get it? LOL.

Ladies, you are doing a wonderful job. Keep up the hard work.
TIDERIDER chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
Adamanta Banks chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
Thank you for another fun chapter!

I smiled at the "Cusp" mention. I was there a few months ago and purchased some things. I have a friend in grad school at Georgetown and she and I shopped all along M Street. It's lovely.

Looking forward to the next!

You ladies have superb secret agent betas. I adore Cranberry and Bluebonnet.

detroitangel chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
I have a feeling that Edward has a long road to cha-cha town with Bella. She is going to keep it as professional as she can, being her first assignment and all. Plus, she knows of his reputation, so she has been prepared for his inevitable advances.

Pick up a pack of sugar that actually says, "sugar" on it and say, "You dropped your name tag!"

There must be something wrong with my eyes, I can't take them off you.

Is there an airport nearby or is that my heart taking off?

if you were words on a page, you'd be what they call fine print

Hahahahahahahaha! That was fun!
pearl421 chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
Awesome chapter ladies!
I cannot think of a suave enough chat up line for Bondward but I look forward to seeing what others come up with!
All 4 of your stroy rec's totally own me at the moment! Good choices!
I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.

Thanks for posting :)
AngelaSampedro99 chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
What an ass, oh I hope Bella makes him suffer for it good. LOL! Great chapter
andreamid chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
Great chapter. Can you tell Jacob to take a hike allready? I don't like that dog.
A xx
PBJilly chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
oh, that was a delicious chapter. I cannot wait until you get these two out in the field! I really don't want him to be able to read her mind-it gives him an unfair advantage. It will be so fun to see these two tangle!
lovebel chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
Go Bella! I like her! Of course I like Agent Cullen *smirks* even more! You have really written him very good as a cocky arrogant, dare I say, bastard ;)
Thank you for the interesting update
Till next time,
Lovebel xo
mercurio1217 chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
Ok so here's my lame/corny/dirty pick up line...

"So I was at my uncles farm the other day out by the pond. The cat fell in the pond and the rooster laughed. So, The moral of the story is that a Wet Pussy always make a Cock Happy."

insert groan here...

Anyways...I love this story and sexy bad boy Bondward. I hope Bella gives him a touch chase, but let's him catch her eventually. Cant wait to read more!
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