Reviews for Lethal to Virtue |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh snap! The only way to read her thoughts is to touch her! Now THAT'S going to be interesting. Hahahah, he's going to be falling over himself to touch her, and I bet anything she's going to be stubborn as hell. Fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lemonmartinis and Klrtwilight! I had no idea you had a story out and that its BONDWARD! *dies* Great start, I'm loving the cockiness of Edward and I'm really interested to see what you two have up your sleeves! Larin20 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait to read more. Great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm interested to see where this is going :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey girls, Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your prologue. I have a serious soft spot for manwhore Edwards and the fact that this one is Bond ward? Swoon! I'm looking forward to more - I think this is going to be fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...now this is something I haven't read before...I like the set-up. Ready for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start, ladies! Terrific premise for a story - I can't wait to see where you go with it. Congrats on your virgin posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh I'm liking the start of this fic! Interesting spin on the mind-reading capabilities...can't wait to see where this goes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha... He was wondering when he was younger if "all people really this depraved?" If that isn't the pot calling the kettle black ! How depraved is he? taking advantage of his gift to the highest point. know ahead of time whom he could score of adds to his cockiness (no pun-haha).. looking forward to future postings to see how he chooses to handle the silent Swan mind. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi ladies! Very nice prologue! This promises to be terrific fic. You third person narration works really well. Your E seems like he's going to be quite the character. I look forward to leaning more about him, and watching his characterization unfold. Initial thoughts: with his um...proclivities (shall we say), I would imagine that his mind reading gift has saved him from more than one sexual harrassment grievance :) I did visit your blog, and wanted to offer one gentle suggestion. You mention The Farm in your Chapter 1 Teaser. The Farm is actually Camp Peary near Williamsburg, VA, and is the CIA training center (although they never officially recognize it as such). The FBI Training Academy is located in Quantico, VA, and the agents and law enforcement folk I've known simply call it "Quantico." I've never heard it referred to as "The FARM." I hope that is helpful. Looking forward to what's next. xoxo, drs |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cullen,Edward Cullen interesting, is this to be continued? Would like to know . |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm intrigued! Good job ladies! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sounds very interesting...and different...I like ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! Looking forward to more ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving it! Can't wait for the update! |