Reviews for Lethal to Virtue
lippylou chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Hey Gals

Wow, Bondward is going to be a very naughty boy I'm guessing. I'm loving every word of it. I can really see your personalities peeking through in the writing.

I'm so proud of the both of you for having the courage to do this. Well done.

ange de l'aube chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Congrats girls...

I'm so happy for you, and I expect many, many good things coming from Bonward *winks*

I wouldn't give him the time of day though, he's way too cocky (it's just me or all I write has innuendo lol) anywho... I hope Bella gives him a hard doesn't just succumbs to his charms...I'm a sucker for UST...

Love you guys, thanks for the shout-out, it wasn't necessary though... I do so little whilst you give us so much in the form of Bondward.

73lachristine chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Damn, you two are evil. What an interesting Edward you've created. I'm intrigued.

More? Please? :D
jjohnson78587 chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
I'm liking how this is starting out.

Love the idea that Bella is an agent and not a damsel in distress. Can't wait to see how badass she is.

Looking forward to what comes next.
PBJilly chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Very nice start- I am loving what you have given us so far. You are very good at description and setting the scene-it was a bit foreboding. This doesn't sound like "hearts & flowers"! I hope you will be regularly updating cause I am dying for more!
Rene2608 chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Okay, fan girl time...

*jumps up and down with clapping hands* this is so good, He is an ass just like I like my Edward...

Great job girls, all the very best to you in this endeavor, putting yourselves out there is hard and you have my utmost respect.

Now let me be the first to be a wise-ass and say;


coachlady1 chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Lubbed it! Damn, he's fuckin sexy... little shit! Looking forward to chappie 2!
RoseArcadia chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Woho, Bondward is here Baby!
jedigirlsc chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
like it so far! looking forward to the next chapter!
dragonladytx chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
You did it, guys! First chapter posted. Your FF cherry popped! Congradulations.

So far, so good. I do think I am going to like this Bondward.
ChampagneAnyone chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
eek looking forward to more

Navarre chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
A really good Pologue, ladies - well done!

My question is, other than Edward's ability, will this story have other supernatural elements to it? Bella's ability to block Edward's ability to read her mind seemed to extend to the room around him. He became aware of others thoughts as soon as she left.

Also, was he aware that the girl he was admiring was indeed the girl from the bio he was recounting? The sentence made it seem like he knew the bio and the girl(Bella) were the same and of course, they are. Am I making sense? Not trying to be dumb here. :)

I really look forward to following this story - it looks great!
elizabethan chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Congratulations on posting the prologue to your first story!
kelysuperficial chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
*bouncy claps* Woot! First chapter is a WIN, Bond Girls! Nice visuals I mean, of course, this passage:

It didn't hurt that her tongue was pierced, and boy did he love the way the bar pressed against the vein in his cock.


Looking forward to where you take us with Bondward - SQUEE!

And, thx for the lovely know how I *need* that being the needy slore that I am!


Kelly (kelysuperficial)
FFpassion chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Congrats ladies, happy to finally see you post your story, can't wait to read more :)

wishing you both the very best


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