Reviews for Tsahaylu
lovebird17 chapter 4 . 3/6/2011
Hi!

I adore this it's great how you didn't allow Ney'tiri and Jake to be together, they're great in THE film, but in fanfic, I'm not à big fan.

Sorry for THE spelling mistakes, my dad's iPad tries to correct it into Dutch... Very annoying, I can assure you.

Purry love,

Lovebird17
RuinofDarkness chapter 4 . 6/13/2010
I love how you describe everything! It definitely gets the job of understanding how Tsahaylu is across :D
Gyre chapter 4 . 6/13/2010
A good look at the differences between bonding to Toruk, and bonding to an Ikran. Not to mention a uniqie insight into why there so few Toruk makto. Good job.
1Timberwolf chapter 4 . 6/13/2010
Great chapter, I loved it.
1Timberwolf chapter 3 . 5/24/2010
Wow, I really enjoyed these three chapters. Thanks for posting, can't wait to see more.
rachiixox chapter 2 . 4/22/2010
very good start
Gyre chapter 2 . 4/22/2010
Looking forward to when Jake seeks out Toruk to return to the clan, I'm sure his Ikran doesn't think much of the idea. Then we get to bonding to Toruk itself.
Jarvey chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Great start to your writing efforts, well done.