Reviews for Beach Fun
Karen chapter 9 . 6/29/2010
Good chapter, just make sure you are proof reading, you have a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes!

Go Jisbon!
GraceVanPelt Fan chapter 9 . 6/29/2010
good chapter i hope you update soon
GraceVanPelt Fan chapter 8 . 6/23/2010
Awesome chapter i hope you write more soon
MissMissKerry chapter 8 . 6/23/2010
Love it :D

Jisbon rules
MissMissKerry chapter 7 . 6/17/2010
Love it hope you write more very soon can't wait
GraceVanPelt Fan chapter 7 . 6/17/2010
that was a good chapter but weird between Lisbon and VanPelt hope you update the story soon
WaitingForHope chapter 7 . 6/17/2010
i love this story! been reading it since the start, and despite my rule not to read M rated stuff, i cant help myself, great chapter, cant wait for the next!
JRRS chapter 7 . 6/17/2010
I'm glad you're back and with another fun chapter to read.

When Van Pelt is drunk she doesnt have any inhibitons, I wonder what she would ask in the next chapter.
GraceVanPelt Fan chapter 6 . 6/7/2010
great chapter hope u update soon
leahxlol chapter 6 . 5/31/2010
more more more, more please? :D
JRRS chapter 6 . 5/30/2010
Thanks for the update. It was as fun as the others chapters. Good luck with your exam. Ill be waiting for your next entry.
EternalDarkness'nRandomness007 chapter 5 . 5/22/2010
Lol! love it! -But maybe check over it a bit more for grammar and spelling mistakes x

leahxlol chapter 5 . 5/14/2010
I love Rigspelt, therefore I love this story lol xD Cat wait for more :-) x
JRRS chapter 5 . 5/14/2010
You werent kidding. It was a very M rated chapter and really fun to read. Nice work.
leahxlol chapter 4 . 5/7/2010
immense :) x
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