Reviews for Beach Fun
JRRS chapter 4 . 5/7/2010
Grace and Cho, I didnt see that coming. Rigsby was a good sport about it.
Well done. This side of them (their drunken and free of inhibition side) is fun to read. I hope you update soon.
RisingStar13 chapter 3 . 5/2/2010
I. love. this. story. I can't wait until you update!
JRRS chapter 3 . 5/2/2010
I had a lot of fun reading this chapter. Nice work.
Rigspelt Shipper chapter 3 . 5/2/2010
That was fun! I'd love to see them when they're not working on the show as well! Keep writing )
DanniGaGa chapter 3 . 5/2/2010
KEEP WRITING its amazing!
leahxlol chapter 3 . 5/1/2010
Haha, great story :) cant wait for more :) x
Rigspelt Shipper chapter 2 . 4/24/2010
Wow... can't wait to read about the game )

I really like the story so far, please update soon, especially now that they broke up I need something to cheer me up lol
thatpotterfreak chapter 2 . 4/23/2010
hey!

i really liked this story!

i am a really bad speller too, but if you do it on microsoft word or something like that which has spell check on it, it helps alot!

cant wait to see what happens next ]

keep writing!

anna-grace
GraceVanPelt Fan chapter 2 . 4/23/2010
oh my god that was really good i hope you update soon
MissNitaGirl chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Ahh a fresh new writer thanks for joining us :)

sounds like this could be a good story but I

have to be honest it was extreamly hard to read

quite alot of sentences didn't make sence. But

I can tell you have talent fix the spelling and you

have the potential to be a fantastic writer.

P.S. My first story was the same I'm horriable

at spelling I just seem to miss all the mistakes in

my own writing no matter how many times it read

over it. May I suggest investing in a beta they are

very helpfulx
JRRS chapter 2 . 4/23/2010
I thinks its good. I had fun reading it.
GraceVanPelt Fan chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
I LOVE THIS STORY!

i hope you update soon :)
redneckdetectiv chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
I don't know where you plan to take it but I think it has a lot of potential. It's really good so far and it seems in character too while being a different enough situation to be interesting.
Rigspelt Shipper chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Yup! It's good! But I have a question... are Rigsby and Van Pelt together in your story? I guess they are but I'm not sure...

Anyway I really like the storyline and I can't wait to see what will happen the night )
JRRS chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Well done. So far I like it and all of them in Rigsby's place and later in the beach sound fun to read. I'll be waiting for your next update.
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