|Reviews for Clark Kent is Dead!|
| VFSNAKE chapter 6 . 4/27/2010
YEAH! TAKE THAT LOIS! YOU DON'T DESERVE HIM! NEVER! LOL! GO CLARK AND DIANA!
| Kairan1979 chapter 5 . 4/27/2010
That was very bitter and sad. I really wish somebody could hurt Lois back for hurting Clark.
| VFSNAKE chapter 5 . 4/26/2010
Interesting fic. I really don't like Lois. She's hurting him inside and if I was there, I'd punch her in the face, and call her a damn fool. But that's me. Though I imagine Diana would love to do that herself. PLEASE MAKE THAT HAPPEN!
| HELLACRE13 chapter 5 . 4/26/2010
You write this exceptionally well ;the emotions between Clark and Lois to show how bitter and sad breakups can be. It was sensitively done showing how much Clark had invested his emotions in this but how he is slowly learning and becoming felt very real.
| Kairan1979 chapter 4 . 4/25/2010
I liked that Clark is back on farm. It can help his soul to heal. Also Diana helping him when he is vulnerable and Martha's words of wisdom.
Looking forward to see more? What about Connor and Kara?
| Robenson chapter 4 . 4/25/2010
Good chapter! I cannot wait for the rest.
| chrisguy9017 chapter 4 . 4/24/2010
Cool chapter. I liked how Martha reacted to the Lois news, usually when people write stories along this line, shes usually all sappy and mild about everything instead of acting how the typical mother would when they found out thier daughter-inlaw left their son.
| ben10987654321 chapter 4 . 4/24/2010
Loved seeing Clark back on the farm. As the place that he grew up in and i think defines him he always seems most at home there.
Clark, Diana and Krypto. That is a lovely image.
Clark grieving for what he has lost and Diana being there where in the end he allows himself to be vulnrbale in front of her. Nicely handled and very touching.
Martha is best when she is full of sage wisdom and she is so onto what is really going on between Clark and Diana.
You mentioned Conner and Kara. It would be interesting to see their reaction too if it would fit in with your story. I can imagine if it was the hot-tempered version of Kara that she would have to be held back from doing many unpleasant things to Lois for hurting her cousin.
Anyway great chapter. Hope you update soon!
| HELLACRE13 chapter 4 . 4/24/2010
Beautifully written again.
I love how you show us Clark or Cal (clever) getting back into the swing of things on the farm. I think it must be as natural to him as is writing and flying. I too hate the notion that being born on a farm makes you some sort of naive fool who can't understand life . Lois calling him Smallville says a lot.
Clark grieving with Diana. Well and sensitively done.
Martha must already know which way the wind blows. heck even Krypto knows. But Clark needs to mourn.
So many little details in this about Clark as a man strikes a cord.
Please update soon.
| Kairan1979 chapter 2 . 4/21/2010
The truth hurts, but Clark needed to hear it, from the man who knew everything about losses - Bruce Wayne.
| Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Lois is forcing Kal to abandon his human identity because she wants a divorce? Can't she understand that he can't be Superman 24/7, that he need Clark Kent? I wish Martha Kent was there to give her a piece of her mind!
| ben10987654321 chapter 3 . 4/21/2010
I would say honest truths this time between friends. I can get why Diana wouldn't miss Clark Kent the facade he created to be a reporter and have his dual existence as Superman. Maybe this is a chance for her to see the real Clark Kent. The one that grew up on the farm, the person i like to think deep down he always remains at his core.
I liked Diana's honest appraisal of Lois and of her feelings for her but Diana is always honest.
Great chapter. I hope the next one is soon.
| ben10987654321 chapter 2 . 4/21/2010
More hard truths for Clark but he knew he was going to get them. Like Bruce said that is why Clark went there in the first place. That's what friends are for i guess.
Anyway another great chapter.
| ben10987654321 chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Wow Lois hitting him hard with some truths there.
I really laughed when she mentioned Krypto and Clark suddenly thought that Krypto could be the one that saved him. That was good. I mean of course Krypto...it is so obvious. LOL
Great first chapter.
| HELLACRE13 chapter 3 . 4/21/2010
Beautifully written, Charles.
You captured the wisdom of Athena but Diana isn't preachy and flawless eg why she wouldn't be BBF with Lois and she is honest too. I like the idea of him going back to his roots. I always felt a part of Clark the part that loves the rustic side of things,nature...etc is something he would reconnect if ever Lois leaves him or dies. The big city defines her ,not him. I always felt if he was not Superman with the ability to go anywhere or lose himself in Solitude or go home to Smallville, he'd wither in that city. Just like Diana has Themyscira imprinted in her.