Reviews for THE CHOSEN TRILOGY: BOOK II: The Legendary War
kairi loves sora chapter 19 . 4/29/2013
Oh Arceus... Poor Ash it had to be so hard for him to just stand there and let that happen. You know even after Mewto did that I just don't know what he said to Ash and the way that Arceus moved the jewel of life. The secrets that even one seems to be keeping. Somehow I trust Mewto. I guess I will find out when I move to the next one. I will see ya then.
NY514 chapter 16 . 10/14/2012
When Lucia said "let's fly" made no sense because dialga can't fly he doesn't have any wings
NY514 chapter 11 . 10/14/2012
No offense but WORST chapter I ever read
The Monkey Ninja chapter 11 . 2/22/2012
What I don't understand is why doesn't Ash just teleport. I know that he is compleatly clueless sometimes, but enough to forget one of his first and most basic skills when using aura? He's bad, but not THAT bad.
Braniac chapter 19 . 10/14/2011
Lovely story, however... This reminds me of hp6 arceus dumbuldore, mewtwo snape, ash Harry, Brock/misty Ron/hermionie
EthanArden chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
It says to read this synopsis so I don't have to go back to read the 90,000 words , but I'm going to anyway. This seems too good to miss. In a couple of weeks, I'll read this story. This looks very promising, so I can't wait to read!
tennisdesi91 chapter 19 . 6/27/2011
not that I didn't love your story but the last chapter was waaaaay too much like Harry Potter for my tastes. All the same you have a great trilogy going here. I've read both of the first two stories in two days. I love your ideas. Keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 5 . 5/8/2011
all right ash is heading back to pallet town won't every to be shocked to see he's alive
Guest chapter 4 . 5/8/2011
i love the supsense they don't have a clue that ash has been alive for the last three years NICE JOB
Ash the Aura Guardian chapter 19 . 4/15/2011
This piece was definitely more dramatic than the previous novel! Once again, character portrayal was stellar and the story was a well-rounded sequel, with very nicely played out scenes. I hope Ash does not leave the treacherous Legendaries standing!

Signing Off

Ash the Aura Guardian
Ldsprincess chapter 19 . 1/17/2011
hey! sorry it took me so long! i'm in Japan and i don't have much time to review, but WHAT IS MEWTWO THINKING! i was saying to myself, ash don't mave, ash, don't you dare, don't- he did... but i don't think Arceus is dead. he can't die.

"So…are you going to kill me in cold blood, too? Just like you killed Arceus?" Ash heaved out, the anger seeping into his tone. Mewtwo looked on Ash with something akin to pity.

"No…" Mewtwo answered and Ash's facial features softened slightly. "Because of what you taught me seven years ago."

i thought that was cool, and i think it sort of prooved my theory that mewtwo is good through and through. i think that he had to pretend that he kiklled arceus so that he would be trusted, but he can't hurt ash. that prooves it.

where did arceus's body go?

will ash keep hating Mewtwo? i can't see him hating anyone for too long. i don't like that Ash hated Mewtwo...

sorry it's short but i don't have much time

Ldsprincess
CJWrites chapter 19 . 1/4/2011
Yeah now i've thought of it, it does feel like HPatHBP. A very wise and powerful guy takes the chosen one on a expedition and the very wise guy dies. Fair enough, i'm just glad you gave JKR her credid. I cant wait for your next story and i will definately subscribe
canoerider chapter 19 . 1/4/2011
Very good unexpected ending. Like you said it has a vast amount of similarities to harry potter. I would like to give you a constructed review about your stories but at the moment its almost 4 am and i am very tired and a head ache coming on. Just wanted to show my support for you; I've been actually reading your story since the first chapter of the first book came out but i never had the time to ever review! Sorry! ' anyways keep it up! your a very good writer and story teller and you update very often, so I'm super happy. I'll be looking forward to the next book ill be checking my email every day ;]
HarunaRei chapter 19 . 1/3/2011
I am sorry that Arceus had to go, but I can understand why you had to do it. There was some hinting at it in the previous chapter, and once I read the title to this chapter, I knew what I was in for. I now understand what Arceus was probably hiding from Ash, and why he was so clandestine with all of Ash's questioning. If he'd let Ash in on what was going to happen, Ash would certainly have killed himself to see to it that Arceus survived. The idea of the planet itself grieving is a very poignant scene, though I doubt that humanity as a whole really understands just what it was they lost that night.

I can see from this chapter and your summary of the final book that Ash will take this very hard, so I look forward to seeing how true loss and grief will force his character to grow. People never are quite the same after losing someone close to them, and perhaps now Ash will understand better the pain his friends and family endured the three years he was gone.

You're on my watch, and I look forward to reading the closing act on this trilogy. )
Reeeeeema chapter 19 . 1/3/2011
This was one amazing book, had me in suspense for the next chapter each time. I enjoyed the final 2 chapters the best. Can't wait for the 3rd book!
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