Reviews for Binary Star: The choice between past and present
Guest chapter 9 . 2/12/2017
I don't like the chapter i she doesn't take Edward back
jk chapter 5 . 10/26/2016
He kisses her and all her non existant will power goes out the window?
Guest chapter 6 . 9/18/2016
To be honest. I hate the story... fucking someone when you have a boufriend especially when its your ex who leave you... Its like hypocrite that she doesn't care for what the others feelings.. Just hate the story like those who will chose those who hurt you is a blind woman... don't like the concept at all. Not all... It shows that Bella character here is like a user and not a martyr... he use the guys like a rebound
jk chapter 13 . 10/26/2015
So bella is lying and cheating on her boyfriend...hanging our with the guy she cheated with...broke said boys heart but still feels like its ok to straddle him and try to turn him on even though she told him she chooses derek over him?
bella keeps getting worse and worse. like I said befre shes a horrible person in this story she easy,weak,a liar, cheater and she comes off as skanky
jk chapter 10 . 10/26/2015
so shes gonna stay with derek and be friends with the guy she just fucked...yaaa that's gonna be great! cause wwe all know that she can be just his friend...and I'm sure derek will appreciate that when he finds out...I hope derek kills bella seriously shes a horrible person in this story...a lying cheating whore
jk chapter 9 . 10/26/2015
so the whore is gonna string derek along until she knows that she has a solid hook into Edward? wow shes a bigger cunt then I thought...bella should just die shes not who I thought she was
jk chapter 7 . 10/26/2015
tell me this, why does the cheating whore think she can choose between derek and Edward? SHE JUST CHEATED ON DEREK why the fuck would he want her now? and she didn't just have sex with someone else...oh no, she cgave her virginity away...that betrayel is HUGE I hope derek calls her what she is, a whore and then never talks to her again
jk chapter 5 . 10/26/2015
LOL ya I knew the previous four chapters were complete bullshit. I bet bella didn't even try to pop dereks cherry even though she humped Edwards leg like the whore she is...all he has to do is say I lied sorry and shes making out with him even though she has a fucking boyfriend...funny how she can just hurt derek like hes nothing...bellas a stupid cunt. assward prullen left FOR YEARS! and all he has to do is say sorry?
and why have her embarrass the fuck out of herself with that you broke me, you broke everything bullshit? god she sounded so stupid I was embarrassed for her
jk chapter 4 . 10/26/2015
hes a 21 year old 113 yr old vampire and hes a virgin? wow bella you sure know how to find them!
she better jump on that shit with a quickness
Motherof8 chapter 20 . 7/5/2014
Great story. Loved the epilogue. So happy she chose Edward. Love that you gave them a child. Thanks for a good story.
Motherof8 chapter 15 . 7/5/2014
Oh what a tangled web we
Motherof8 chapter 14 . 7/5/2014
Is Bella bipolar?lol
Motherof8 chapter 11 . 7/5/2014
Glad he is not giving up
Motherof8 chapter 10 . 7/5/2014
Are they crazy...friends?
Motherof8 chapter 9 . 7/5/2014
Can't Edward read Derek' mind?
359 | Page 1 2 3 4 11 .. Last Next »