this is really really good! pleasse continue soon!

i love this story, but unfortunatly i have to go to sleep now so i will finish tomorow

Awesome! I am so glad that you updated! I miss this story! I can't wait for more, and it totally rules! Oh- could you email me like you did for this chapter when you update agian? Very handy. I love it!

love your story! please update soon or i shall melt! when are lyra & will going to meet already? :)

Hey, sorry, i gotta write you another review, it's just that my computer can't handle the full force of replying to an e*mail, shi-...

But anywayz, yeah, i asked if you were a guy, because of the name of the story: The Stained Blade. You see, I've got a lot of guy friends, and growing up, I didn't like girls too much, because they were stuck up all wrong. And the guy-friends I got now are Anime/Tech-no freaks. The tittle just reminded me of them.

M-mm, have you read The Sally Lockhart Trilogy by Philip Pullman? In book two, he killed off Sally's love, when he was tryin' to save this girl in a fire. It was really really sad. He was a main charcter (strongly suggest you read it!). Perhaps there is an exception to all rules?

Scared Little Bunny? My boyfriend started to cry when he heard that one. I'm the one with the strong countance, such as Lyra. (Ok, now i'm comparin' my self w/fictional charcters from a book. I've lost it. Plain and simple.)I know, I sounded like that durin' the review, but mostly 'cause I sound self-centerec about y opinions, and of a girl of 14, well, i'm more in-sightfull, and I easily critiscize books, 'cause I love to read.

It's good to hear that dome people don't hate me when I say I didn't enjoy all of the narnia stuff. I don't know if i've said this allready, but the ideas are really good, but they never seem to satisfy my taste for what the author should've wrote. For example: Faherenheit 451.

Sorry, if this was a bit confusin', my writin' tends to do you've read my Prolouge for my fanfic, then you know it's doomed for confusion, and some wacked ideas.

You're probably right about how the details would probably be borin', but you're lucky that's all they have to say.

Keep writin', and I hope you get some better reviews. Especially after mines. Oh, by the way, luv your bio.

This story kcked ass, but I think you should add a bit more details into it, simply, 'cause they seem to get to everything to quickly. Example: Lyra, when she was looking for the Dora (except she didn't know it was Dora). You said it took her a while, but maybe you should add some datails to make it seema a tad realistic. Yeah I've read some of Narnia, and I know y ou're gonna hate me for sayin' this, but I think the author didn't fill the potential of his stories, but to the point, HDM is actually under Fantasy rather then Sci-fi. I only know this, because I tried to do a project on The Subtle Knife, but I wasn't allowed, because it wasn't under Sci-fi. Please don't think less of me, and I don't want you to get the wrong impression of me. But, I gotta a few questions, that you may/not want to/can answer. Will's gonna Kill Lyra, andif not her, Serafina huh? and are you a guy? If you give me a response to this, i'll explain. Please, don't make little dolls of me and hang them from any trees and do a little dance around a bon-fire! "*hides!*" gtg, ttyl (hopefully!)

Erlinda

Hey! Get back to writing, you! Dont leave us just standing here!

Can we all say. . . WOW?

*looks around hysterically for more* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! it can't end there! :( are you gonna contiue? PLEASE? PRETTY PLEASE I BEG OF YOU THIS IS THE BEST HDM FICCIE OUT THERE!

Ahh i have been waiting forever for you to update. Well since you are gonna take the time and really put some effort into the story then i am willing to wait. Even more than waiting for a story to be updated i hate it when a writer completes it just to get it over with so its good that you aren't trying to do that.

Alright, people, listen up! This is the Author writing!

This story had been put on hold for a while due to my newly developed passion of other fiction (read: Anime/Manga). I would write on this as well, but I fear the quality of the work would suffer if my heart is not fully in my writing. That is why I ask of all of you to be patient. Belive me, I know how it feels to love a story which is never updated. I have NOT given up on this story. It is very dear to me and WILL be updated sooner or later. Thank you.

Alrigh, alright! Jeez! Look, I promise to update as soon as I can. I promise!

It's just that I have a serious Anime-period right now. Gotta go with the feeling, ya know?

PLEASE WRITE MORE! You haven't written in quite a while and i am immensely enjoying your ff so please write another chapter!

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

One of the best fics I've seen to date. Please keep updating, I am really enjoying this!