You seemed to rush the part with teh sword too much. Next time it might be better i f you tried too spend more time on his emotions durrign times like that. Keep going, oh and i hope they don't end up in each others world instead of being in the same one. That would really be cruel to the characters.

So far it is good. Please countinue. Did you notice you called Dr. Lindh Dr jacobson once?

just out of curiosity...why is this chapter called "Seana" if you never even use that word in it?

umm... if will agreed not to open anymore windows, hence the braking of the knife, why now suddenly is it alright to free up some specters?

oh, and, "The clock showed 00.4" huh?

this chapter is good, just, it seemed too easy for lyra to find her guide

aletheiometer! even if you are english, Pullman spells it Altheiomether. oh and, i don't think that lyra would say "you read my mind, pan" seeing as how they, for the most part, share a mind

will's not kirjavas master... we are NOT the "masters" of our daemons. they are us, and we are them

Well! This is one of the most remarkable HDM fics I've read. More of a hybrid/crossover really but still fascinating. Do keep going!

This is good, though it doesn't really follow along with HDM. It seems more like fantasy than sci-fi. Please contiune soon.

Excellent! You must continue! Please... _

Jo, så kan det vara... jag korrekturläser gärna, om du vill :)

Tack för din positiva kommentar om min egen historia - mer blir det förhoppningsvis snart, men du vet ju vad det *egentligen* innebär...

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[Swedish responce since Wolf on Air is, apparently, aslo Swedish ;)]

Tack för komplimangen, Wolf on Air. Jag kör faktiskt stavningskontroll, men eftersom att båda orden finns i engelskan slinker vissa igenom. Kan liksom inte undvikas, tyvärr.

*laughs malignantly at everyone who doesn't understand a word*

[Swedish review since the author is Swedish]

Mycket bra skrivet - fantasy blir ofta konstlat och tråkigt, men icke så här. Du bör dock köra en stavningskontroll - det heter "knack", inte "nack" osv. :)

This is very excellent. I can't wait to see what happens! You've really gotten me intrigued! Please update soon; we all hate having to wait so long! P Toodles, and thanks for your latest review!

*Glares* You really need to update! Come on! It's a really good story! By the way, the latest chapter of my own HDM fic (The Only Ones Left) is finally up, so give it a read maybe? And please...update soon!