|Reviews for Imperfect Tense|
| asialisek chapter 23 . 7/10
this story is going so well, all the build up and anticipation and suspense!
totally looking forward to the next chapter,
| Kibetha chapter 22 . 6/8
Thank you so much for the update! The battle was fantastic and I love the way you don't flinch from injury, even when friend is fighting against friend. Great job, and here's to a smooth recovery for Squall...? Fingers crossed!
| kellie1999 chapter 22 . 6/8
You better not have killed Squall or Cloud off later or I will be disappointed and possibly cry. Overall, the chapter was great, besides the grimness. Nice job and I hope to hear from you soon and not 6 months later.
| KalNim chapter 20 . 12/11/2015
Omg, Cloud and the chocobos are soo cute. I love this side of him xD.
| Kai'kel the Fereldan Magister chapter 20 . 11/29/2015
Well, this is incredible. The fusion of the two worlds is, while not entirely seamless, very well handled. The Jenova - Sorceress and Cetra - Centra links actually make a lot of sense, same with ShinRa turning into Esthar. I'm definitely curious to see where you're taking the sane Sephiroth thread. Also, thank you for recognizing and addressing the inherent problems with pre-insanity Sephiroth/Cloud, due to both the age and rank discrepancy. So many authors completely ignore the power dynamic issues there, while you seem to be actually addressing them, and using the opportunity for some truly great character development! I eagarly await the next installment.
Your New Loyal Reader,
Kai'kel, Fereldan Magister
| Lyxeria chapter 20 . 11/27/2015
I felt nostalgic, felt like reading good old ff7 or ff8 fanfic and don't I fall on this little candy! I'm glad people are still active on this fandom! :-)
Thank you I enjoyed it and I hope you keep writting!
| Ever-Rin chapter 20 . 9/22/2015
Thank you so much for the update! It's good to see this fic in action again ;)
| blackkyu chapter 20 . 9/3/2015
Haha, love Zell right now.
| kellie1999 chapter 20 . 8/5/2015
Nice ending. :)
| matchynishi chapter 20 . 8/5/2015
alkjsdlskdj lmao im loving zell's lines so much lmao he's hilarious. XDDD cloud is so asdkjfllakdsjf as always. i cant wait forr more of sephiroth and vincent and all the rest aaaaaaaaah
| Change of Heart-Good and Evil chapter 15 . 6/26/2015
What a great story! I'm so glad to have stumbled onto it! I'm sad though that there aren't any new updates. I hope you update soon! I really like the concept that the FFVIII world is the future incarnation of the FFVII's world. I'm really looking forward to what's next so please be merciful and grant us another chapter!
| Failisse chapter 15 . 5/6/2015
This fic is so fucking good! I NEED to have more of it. Please, please, PLEASE update again soon! I am loving this story and the slow but steady progression towards the climax. I hope Cloud and Sephiroth won't have to fight each other. I hope that Cloud can understand, and forgive, and hopefully be together with him in the end, and Squall with Seifer too. Lord knows that these angst-bucket men need a little light and love in their life after all the taintedness and despair they have been through. Throw Vincent a bone as well, he might need a little happy boost after all is said and done. Looking forward to your next chapter! :D
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/13/2014
I like this Tale its epic makes sense too. I love how you made Vincent so sexy! Because he is soooooooo sex on legs. Takes Tall Dark and Handsome to another level
| The Invisible Fan chapter 14 . 8/9/2014
Fantastic chapter. I love the exchange between Cloud and Vincent. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
| rexka.kin chapter 14 . 8/5/2014
I need more please!