Reviews for Submission
Jaeqo chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
agree i like the way your story was...but there was a grammar error and spelling error : 3 i know u can keep it up. U can have a twist on the story nee.,..u can ask me if you want my suggestion nee : 3 love this pairings even though i still dont have any stories of them. Lukin' forward 2 ur next chapter...
SLYSWN chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Little did Ichigo know Grimmjow was watching him, lol...nah probably not but its such a lovely image you painted and it kinda leaves ones mind (such as myself) free to run wild.
Platypus-Mastermind chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
ya know what? I think there should be another chapter with Grimmjow...ya know, just 'testing' it out ;)

gaaaaah grimmjow's sadistic, making ichigo masochistic, you've gotta have another chapter with the two of them!

please :3
Kobato00 chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Nice, it was short of course but I liked how you write it, the flow of it and the descriptions, now to read the other ones D
xoxInnerHollowxox chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
That was hot *nosebleed*
blackcherry21 chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
hot. that's all i have to say~
seximonki chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
lmfao, i could totally see something just like this happening in the show/manga.

nicely done. even if it was solo it was still really well done smut.
FlyinGShadoW1314 chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Heh, naughty Ichi. :D This was pretty good, but yu need a beta reader to fix yer mistakes.
13animenurd13 chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
O.o never thought Ichigo would be the type to mastrabate...