|Reviews for Ether|
| Shezka Foxe chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Tis very well written. I like how you included the mad piper and especially the end. "Wary of deals with devils and spades". I kind of get a sense a lesson or a moral is hidden here for a person to learn. Or, possibly, a warning. It's bittersweet of you combined hiding behind shields "mangled and torn".
I don't usually find rhyming poems like this. It's very unique unto itself and I believe it describes Severus in the way that he wishes to befriend those around him but due to Voldemort he is unable too and has to keep himself seperate from everyone else.
| loveislouder94 chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
I thought this was a very well written and enjoyable poem. Well done! :)
| DaughterOfHades1994 chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
Amazingly touching- I can just imagine...
You have a great style of writing... Please continue!