|Reviews for Service With A Smile|
| endmylifeohmygod chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
If I was a waiter/waitress there, there would be service with a smile! Most definitely!
| iloveme5895 chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
AWWWWW that was sooooo cute! i loved it
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
Service with a smile? More like sevice with a snog ;D
I liked it. Thought it was cute, a little different (seeing as how everyone would expect Zuko to be the waiter), and a good length to keep readers interested in the little guessing game. Too much longer and I might've gotten bored trying to decipher which boy you were talking about. The 'he' and 'his' repetition did start to get a little confusing though in some parts, when you would switch who you're talking about but don't indicate it by saying 'the waiter' or 'the customer' or something alone those lines.
But yeah, very cute, and very good for your first contribution to Avatar fanfiction. Hope you roll out some new stuff soon