Reviews for James Sirius, Spy Extraordinaire
Blank Paige chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
This is really cute. I think you might want to take another look at it in terms of editing because there are a few small grammatical errors. However, they certainly didn't impede my enjoyment of the story.

My two favorite things:

1. Sub rosa sexual innuendo (I laughed out loud at certain points)

2. The Noodle Incident (I assume this is a Calvin and Hobbes allusion; you clearly have good taste when it comes to comics)
Secrets4theunderground chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
HAHA! I soo loved this. It was so cute and funny. James is adorable!
Mehghla chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
That was really funny.

What did Ginny do with the feathers?

And what did the X's really stand for?
Anmylica chapter 1 . 4/4/2011

I have just one thing to say: Kids say the darnest things, but when you're the grandson of James Potter, it's a hundred times worse. :) I loved it!
Mrdr-MistressPadfoot chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
FEATHERS! Genius! This story was the cutest one-shot I have read in a while! I absolutley love James sooo much more now!
Overcome chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
hahaha I loved the story. Really cute.
randomgirloutthere110 chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
exactly how i magined james!

i love it!

the ending is perfect!
enomix chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
HA! Feathers! *wipes away tears of laughter*

This was really enjoyable. I love the witty comments, and the twists! Dicti-quill was an excellent idea, and I can say that although this is T, if you read between the lines- I cannot express how incredibly funny this is in words. Hilarious isn't even close. I'm serious!

James Sirius, Spy Extraordinaire... does he have any future cases?

-Audrey (:
Anne Aragon chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
feathers hahahahah

this was brilliant! I loved little James, he was so funny and this entire fic made me laugh! great job
Scrivensabre chapter 1 . 10/6/2010

I canned myself so badly when James asked about the feathers! Really, amazing one-shot, and I loved the fact that you wrote it from James' POV! I truly don't understand why you don't have more readers/reviewers, because this is a real gem of a fanfic and you're a brilliant writer. The way you made everything fit together for James (the Dicto-Quill was inspired!) was really great, and I love the way he worked out what went where...

But I'm still rolling on the floor laughing about the feathers. Great story! :D
Becksibee chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
haha such a brilliant Fic. I will admit I clicked on quite early what the big surprise was but just reading from the mind of a 7 year old was hilarious.

I liked the way you snook sneaky comments in like listening to Quidditch and Ginny winning twice.

Like everyone else has asked, what are all the XXX XXXXXX XXX are they actual text or just added for fun?

Dance Floor? Am intrigued.

And the feathers? You have to share that one, got my imagination running wild here.

Overall a very good one-shot. A def fav and will be linking to a couple of friends.

Well Done
liadensummer chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
ohhhh i love it...
Tinkerbell79 chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
This is awesomely cute and funny. Excellent job writing a 7 year old :)

I just have one the XXed words have actual text or are they just for us to imagine? I mean, if I sat down and tired to figure out based on the number of letters for each word...are there actual words? I tried to figure a few out...but no such luck. I was as frustrated as James :)

untitledmind chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
'"What did Mum do to you with the feathers?"' HA! Priceless
Loonynamelass chapter 1 . 7/6/2010

And you had to end it there, didn't you?

Egads, I wasn't able to figure out more than half of the X's. I suppose I'm too innocent. *sigh*
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