Reviews for The Marcus Adventure |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story. The main characters were just so incredibly likeable and the plot was interesting too, with great smut. Thanks for sharing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m really liking hermione and Marcus together. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a sweet story! Thank you for writing and sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really wanted to like this story. It had a cute start and I like it when people write Hermione being friends with Slytherins. But that’s about where my enjoyment ended. I couldn’t go past this chapter. I don’t understand why people feel the need to write Hermione as a straight up superhero. She’s smart and witty, sure. But she’s a Healer who doesn’t work at St. Mungos and now has natural abilities? I feel like this story was just going to keep getting more and more ridiculous, and I saw I was right when I read the last sentence of chapter 4. What an absurd concept. I can’t imagine how the story could get worse over the rest of the chapters but I’m sure you manage to fit as many garbage tropes in as possible. I know this story is 10 years old, so I’m really hoping your writing got better over time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow! Thank you so much for giving us the opportunity to read this lovely and adorable story. It brought me great pleasure and a lot of smiles. Now I will check out the rest of your collection because this was a nice treat and as the greedy reader I am I want more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoy this pairing so much. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Of course I enjoyed Lemons were epic Romance were sweet! Marcus and his dad were drool worthy. Awesome fic Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this story made me emotional. Haven't decided which kind of emotional though Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it a mess up that Ch 9 is a vague retelling of the Ch 8 ending? Not hating, genuinely asking. Love the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved this! |
![]() ![]() lovely story. Thank you so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah this was lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was wonderful... |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well fuck |