Reviews for The Factions
Tomuchhutch chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
My only critique, is that your letting a very good story go to waste and stagnate
Lady of the Crimson Ravens chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Go Allen! Don't let the Noah take over! Lenalee's waiting for you.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
I just found the story hat connects to this one today and I read it. Then, thinking how freakishly good it was I went and looked for a sequel, which is how I found this story. Please continue! I need more stories to read that are awesome! I don't even know if you still know about your fanfiction account, but if you do you must continue this story. I must see how it ends!
blazeinferno chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
just finished the first story and read this first paragraph and i am loving it so far please update soon
Funeral of the Fallen Musician chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
Awesome story! Great start and I look forward to more! Also the part where Rouvelier punched Allen in the the gut for his use of pronouns had me laughing my ass off. Keep up the great work and please update soon!
Crazy-T7 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
I read the story and looked up and noticed you posted this over a year ago. Sure it's not accurate to the current chapters but I encourage you to write on! :) The story was really great. So was the parasite. Pleeeeeeeaaase write on! :D
tonytaker chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
good job
Nyk chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Please oh please don’t stop now, it’s bloody awesome, I love it!
IKRK chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
THIS ISTORY IS AWESOME! I just finished The Parasite and that was awesome please dont stop this story.
crowned crown yandere chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
nice job
Xixinate chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
I'll be straight-forward: I like it much as I like your previous story Parasite. I also like how you put Rovulier as Allen's father. I'm wating now-impatiently- for the next chapter to come out! :D
dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
This is a good story. Please continue. Allen and Lenalee forever.
Firehedgehog chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
just fond the two fics, both are great :D
addenza chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
Whee~ A sequel finally! I almost forgot about what had happened in the prequel, until I read this story and remembered what it was about. :D
elrond-76 chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
That's very interresting. I hope you will update soon, and I will read again The Parasite until the next update.