Reviews for Of Possessions
Kyoki no Kage chapter 10 . 2/26/2011 this was all just a dream?... or was it real...?

and is the dream of future possesion a foreshadow of kyuubi taking over naruto?
Kyoki no Kage chapter 9 . 2/10/2011
hahaha... 'they hide from me i swear' that made me laugh.. and good chapter... this story gets my blood rushing... i love it...

i like how kyuubi controls naruto liek that... . simply and beautifully amazing...

and thx for answering my reviews...:3

i appreciate it...:3
Kyoki no Kage chapter 6 . 12/19/2010
the ending was epic... naruto could lose himself to the smell of blood and go on a killing spree... that would b awesome...
Kyoki no Kage chapter 5 . 12/19/2010
if u want to make this story better... u should tell us whos talking... i can tell whos the kyuubi and whos naruto... but i cant tell if sasuke talks from naruto... and telling us wen he is and isnt in his mindscape...that would help... other than that... keep up the good work...
Kyoki no Kage chapter 4 . 12/19/2010
nice... but the laugh could b revised...
Kyoki no Kage chapter 3 . 12/19/2010
is this chapter a foreshadowing to events to come?...i hope it is... naruto finally submitting to the kyuubi... that would b awesome to read...
Kyoki no Kage chapter 2 . 12/19/2010
u keep leaving off ur chapters as if they were ideas...ideas that u noted down... if u could explain more...that would b nice...
Kyoki no Kage chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
this story inspires me... and nice idea... the kyuubi takes his body and naruto tries to fight it... nice... very artistic

StMomo chapter 7 . 10/6/2010
Reading through all your work, I'm starting to get the impression that you really, really, really don't like Sakura.

That being said, I'm not exactly sure what to make of this chapter. It's confusing, it takes a lot of thinking about to get. Once you do get it, after many re-reads where you discover new things each time (something that is a very good thing by the way), it's a very interesting, albeit creepy and depressing, chapter though.
StMomo chapter 6 . 10/6/2010
This felt almost OOC and yet, at the same time, it didn't feel OOC at all, if you get what I mean. It's almost like a different interpretation of a character, an AU sort of thing.

This 'evil' Naruto, so to title him, gives me shivers. It's just so easy to see this happening. Very good job! My favorite chapter, I'd say.
StMomo chapter 5 . 10/6/2010
Ahahaha! I know I can't be the only one thinking this but you make the Kyuubi quite likeable. Honestly, I was on his side in this one. I'd hate being told what to do and then being made to do it too!

Spelling and grammar were also good in this one. Nice job over-all!
StMomo chapter 4 . 10/6/2010
This was kind of 'cute', a word I would never have thought of in connection with this collection, that's for sure! It just seemed like a happier bit between these two, which is only fitting since, of course, not every interaction is dripping with angst and anger. Very cute, very nice.
StMomo chapter 2 . 10/6/2010
Ah, this chapter was way better than your first, if I may say so. I really loved this one. Your language was simple and you really allowed the actions to envoke the emotions. I loved the wording of 'sweet and poisonous', two words that sound so different and yet go hand-in-hand so well.

I love the mutal parasitism that you show so well in the interactions between the Kyuubi and Naruto in this chapter. Neither like the other too much, neither really wants the other but they do need each other and so, as always, there will be a struggle for dominance. One must bend or break and I like how you show the Kyuubi bending every once in a while even while he promises to break Naruto the next time.
StMomo chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
I really like the fact that this chapter was told mostly from the point of the Kyuubi. It's interesting and gives it a different perspective, one that you really don't get to see that often. That being said, the use of italics, bolds, and underlines throughout were semi-distracting and it felt a lot like you were switching points-of-views throughout this chapter several times with no segueway which was a bit confusing. Other than that, this shows great potential. It makes me want to go read the next chapter, which is always a great thing.
Anonymous Tobi chapter 5 . 7/5/2010
Woohoo! Stupid sakura was through 50 feet away :D Yesh! I hope she died :3 she was a very useless character. Sasori barly counts as she was used as a puppet and had help. the sound ninja do not count either as she was beaten to a pulp, then saved from her own trap "I think" Give me one canonical time when she actually did something useful such as beat an enemy. Movies don't count.

~Anonymous Tobi
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