I have truely loved this story! It was so well written ans captivating! I’m looking forward to starting to read the sequel and any future works!

What kind of nasty psycho kills Hedwig? Is that supposed to make your fic more believable/dramatic? Or just poor writing skills.

Good story

This story was a great read and a wonderful character development! I enjoyed it immensely!

This is a very good story. Keep up the interesting work!

Thanks for explaining about the attempts on Harry's life

Oh man, I really hope Hermione doesn't throw her hat in the ring. She's after him because she's bored!

I'm know I'm too late but I was thinking that if the girls were friends it might be okay. Also, not Hermione-too bossy and not Ginny-fangirl

I can't see Dumbledore as misguided when he has monitors on Harry and he doesn't check up on him.

I'm loving the story. Bill is awesome and I'm glad that Sirius and Remus is writing to Harry.

Nicely done.

Great changes to Harry. Exciting story

Lovely ending on the beach

Scary and believable

What a mess

Nice job.

The line about Harry and Dobby was so true

Great descriptions