|Reviews for Venice Beach Stories|
| dpennell007 chapter 7 . 11/11/2016
Thanks for another fabulous story! I finished it the other day on my way home from work, and forgot to mention how much I liked it. Near misses between couples turned into wonderful connections, and everyone was left in a good, hopeful place. Bravo!
| Northern Light1000 chapter 7 . 11/10/2014
Excellent shit! Thanks for writing!
| Northern Light1000 chapter 3 . 11/9/2014
| Northern Light1000 chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
Well that was just ridiculously hot! And sincere!
| Killingmesoftl2 chapter 5 . 4/26/2014
So fucking good! I am so glad, that I found this little story. You have amazing talent. I dont even have the words to describe the way you make me feel with your words.
| Killingmesoftl2 chapter 3 . 4/26/2014
Holy shit! Epov was the best! I LOVE every word!
| Killingmesoftl2 chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
This was beyond perfect! Holy shit! Excellent writing!
| TessLouise chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
"You realize that I am probably your only redeeming quality right now, right?"
Hah! Great line!
| buffbronze chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
Just reread this for the fourth or fifth time. Still as amazing as ever. Gets me every time.
| DarkBitterSea chapter 6 . 11/21/2013
Very emotional. You wrote Sarah as her sister, when it's supposed to be Rebecca.
| Erroneous78 chapter 7 . 11/19/2013
I'm so full of new words. I loved this one. So beautifully written and good to see his struggle (which was hard to read in places) become his determination.
| Erroneous78 chapter 6 . 11/19/2013
I did not expect that. At all.
I think I could read their story all day. I loved the new fresh characters.
| Erroneous78 chapter 5 . 11/19/2013
Ohhhhhhh! I did wonder if that was his profession, I guess I just read between the lines a little too much.
Wow. I know nothing about pot & legalities. It's pretty much illegal everywhere here. Not sure though for medicinal qualities,
I loved his declaration of love & when she said this
She's smiling down at me. "Silly boy," she says, and her face is soft, like she's about to cry. "You think I can be without you?"
I think I just melted.
Loved, loved, loved this chapter.
| Erroneous78 chapter 4 . 11/19/2013
Why is she the failure? What can't she give him?
Their story just hurts. So much.
| Erroneous78 chapter 3 . 11/19/2013
Maybe it's because I've spent months watching her, just trying to figure out how to talk to her. Maybe it's because I was halfway to a concussion the first time I saw her and spent two weeks thinking I made her up. Or because when she watches fireworks I can see that she was once a little girl, and when she smiles big, I get this ache in my chest, like I need to be near her. I feel protective of her and that easy smile.
OMG! I thought her words blew me away but his. Oh wow! To get inside his head, to see him warring against what's right, what's wrong and what he just needs.
3 years. Did Rose continue with the pregnancy? I keep thinking maybe there's a child involved. Is Edward playing the role of a father? Or is he involved in something?
Littke snippets come out in each chapter, I'm trying to piece them together.
I love the way you write. So much.