Reviews for A Little Lemon
Draco chapter 1 . 7/10
Me hubiera gustado que fuera mas largo es muy corto solo un día :-(
Aronim chapter 1 . 4/13
Sweet. Funny about the teachers. Barkin being everywhere is always a laugh. Well done.
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 1 . 9/29/2015
odd
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2015
It was ok 6/10
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2015
This was so sweet. Kim was a little ooc but she was just nervous. I really enjoyed the "lemon" aspect of it lol what a great twist! At first I was kinda worried lol
Hound78 chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
Great one-shot!
Jp Marshall Law chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
Nice 1 shot
RicardianScholar Clark-Weasley chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
Mr Barkin just seems to stalk Ron and Kim. all for comical effect obviously but still...
Star chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Meh, college really isn't all that terrible as long as you study...though I gotta say the making friends thing is harder than it was in high school. Soooo many people that you weren't stuck with for 13 years roaming around it's overwhelming sometimes...although I guess I'm kind of like Ron in the sense I talk to random people for like 5 secs lol
Mengsk chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
You may be pushing it carring on the Barkin gag. On the other hand, it proved itself worth it for the Detention line.

I think even Bonnie must have more realistic expectation toward College. Though my opinion seems to be in the minority. All those trashy hollywood college flicks, it would be understandable to think college was more high school.

This does remind me some of University experience. If crammed into one day rather than over four years.

Otherwise it's difficult to find what to comment on. Just a thoroghly well put together piece of innocent romance.
bigherb81 chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
Nice story happy little one shot. That is definately a good one to go to bed on. I enjoyed it immensley great job.
TheRedKommie chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Hehehe, Another home-run in my book DP.

I liked the whole Detention! But we're in college! Page one...

Evil gram HA! And shego thus ends the time wasting Drakken!

DNAmy! She has tenure! WHAT!

Ron is such a sweet boyfriend... wait... I didn't say that! He is a manly man making his woman feel sweet and loved! AAhhhhh.. damnit! I cannot even make my reviews sound manly!

But most of all I love how you titled it a Little Lemon. It being rated T, I wonder how many people came in here expecting something else... I almost did, but then I remember like you a lil "twist" in your stories!

On a side note, you could make a bit of a series out of this. Just some one-shots. Oh well.
The defenastrator chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
DNAmy as a college professor... well I guess she is one of the worlds best genetists. I feel like the best and brightest of any field are slightly insane. Although I don't think Amy being a prof is safe for anyone
SecondSeraphim chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Man, I can see this being the beginning of a full on story, not just a one shot. Give me more!
Reader101w chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Funny story, sounds really plausable.

I loved the part with the 'College' guy diving through the hedges down the hillside, I already had been wondering on how Kim would handle him. great work.

Keep up the good writing,

reader101w
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