Reviews for Good Enough
Cestlaviesuckers chapter 2 . 7/22/2012
Another great chapter! Ugh, poor Bella. James is very creepy and suspicious, I guess. Loving it!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
Great start! I am loving this! :-)
SavageGraceX chapter 2 . 4/20/2011
James is creepy! e_e Poor Jasper - what is up with him? LOL

Can't wait for more! )
SavageGraceX chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
James is a certifiable creep-o P
Cerryn chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
Same as my review for The Only Exception


Soft Ragoo chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
As promised, I'm checking out your stories. ;)

This one looked promising! Why didn't you continue? It's a unique twist having James involved from the beginning and you've created a desire to know more. Write, girl, write!
KareBear1965 chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
Interesting prologue like to see where you take this.

trashcanprince chapter 1 . 7/5/2010


Uh. This is a very good premise, one that I'd be interested in reading more of. I liked how you made Bella seem a lot more like a teenager than an empty shell with no self-confidence whatsoever. I'd always thought that Bella would have to be more mature than she appears because of living with Renée. It's nice to see someone shares my opinion, ahahahaha.

However, I'd like to comment that, while I do like the style you wrote the story in and it captures the thinking processes and mindset of a teenager very well, you should be careful that writing a character like a teenager doesn't turn into writing like a teenager. Which isn't to say that teens can't write; I'm only 18 myself.

What I mean is that at times, the chapter got a little...scattered, I guess is a good word to describe it. It seemed like Bella's mind was in a thousand places at once and trying to do that and move the story along so quickly tends to make it feel kind of jerky. I do the same thing a lot, but again, it's just a comment.

This is definitely another story I'd like to see continued. Your ideas are really interesting, and if developed further they'd make some amazing stories.

- Besh
stephiesue02 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
You should really add more chapters to this one. I loved the insight into her move. Loved it.
GIRL-WHO-FORGOT-HER-USERNAME chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Heey, I love your Fic! Please add some more chapters!