Reviews for As The Rain Beats Down
Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
The end is incredible- this has to be one of the best drabbles I've read.
Sumiko Mikazuki chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
I'm not a Cam/Zack shipper. It doesn't bother me to read it, I just never shipped them. This story was very good however.

I loved this line:

"The latest twist in their relationship has them both dancing awkwardly around each other, neither sure what to do."

And this part:

The other is just a lie, a dream, a whisper in someone's mind. There is enough of reality in both that the casual observer would not be able to tell the difference.

Zach thinks he knows which is real.

So does Cam.

And he smiles, and she weeps.
Owl Emporium chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
This was ambiguous, but I really liked it. You don't know whether it was dream or if it really did happen...I loved it. :D Great job! (:
MiraiFutureGirl chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
OW!

ZACK!

*curls in a corner and shrieks*

must you rip out my heart and crush it?

*glares*

all that aside, this was, well...

the first part, i'd be in heaven if it was the shows current state.

second part... hope they don't steal this idea... :(

you are good!

but i'd love you to be nice to Zack once, please?

i need written proof.

*grins*
domina tempore chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
Wow. O.o Wasn't expecting that, either.

It was good though; short, but...passionet? I think that's the word that I'm looking for. The happy scene was really sweet and natural, and the sad scene was...well, it was tragic; but the way that you showed everyone's emotions and thoughts was beautifu. I've never really thought about Cam and Zach being together before, but I could see everything in this fic in my head, and it didn't seem weird.

I actually really liked the end, the uncertainty. Those last few lines...I loved those last few lines.
cwgirlup chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
Oh. My. God. I did not see that coming.

Seriously, at first I was thinking "Aw, they're together and happy - that's so sweet." And then...

And part of me was *glad* they were all suffering. They ignored him once, and he ended up in the loony bin. Then they ignored him *again*, and this time he killed himself. They damn well should feel guilty.

Great job once again :)