|Reviews for A Stray Black Dog|
| Sirius J Potter chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
This is an interesting take.
| Muchcoffee chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
I absolutely loved this story! It is a wonderful idea, and I love all the little details you put in.
I did notice a lot of grammatical mistakes. Since you asked: Many were typos where your finger simply skipped a letter, others were misspellings (for instance you once misspelled "Comet" as "Commit"). If you run the document through a spell-check program, you should be able to fix those easily (you can probably find something on Google, or if you have a program like Microsoft Word, you can turn on the spell-check in there). The other main problem I noticed was that often you added a comma where you should have ended a sentence, or didn't use the right punctuation. For instance you wrote '"I see you," I hooted towards her, did she really want me to start.' Which should have been '"I see you," I hooted towards her. Did she really want me to start?'.
Other than that, I really loved the story! I adore the concept and I hope you keep on writing it!
| robins princess starfire chapter 3 . 9/18/2010
Lol this is so cool! i love hedwigs point of view! please update soon!
| Bec chapter 3 . 8/7/2010
Great perspective! I really love Hedwig! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
PS. You might want to check your spelling - standers, standards
| Nabakza chapter 2 . 7/22/2010
This is actually quite interesting. I love how all of the animals are so loyal to their owners :) I'd love to read more.
| Irene O'Reilly chapter 2 . 7/17/2010
hi leah m. w.
i favourited your story a long while ago and you asked me why, sorry for such a delayed responce
i like your story for many reasons, i love how you chose a point of view that is hardly ever used, how you very descriptive, and how the story is shaped :) im looking forward to your next chapter
-Biethe Arte Deneverek
| epobbp chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
just need to say, this is awesome and very funny . Hedwig is great.