Reviews for Of Blame and Punishment
xSheepie chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
Nice job! I think you really captured Justin's line of thought :)
pampoo chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
Love it. :)
rachel210491 chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
"But with Brian and me, as much as it was about sex, it was about something more than that, too. The act of allowing someone to physically penetrate your body, of taking them inside for the first time, is about trust and it's about giving them a piece of yourself, a piece that you can't ever really take back no matter how badly you want to".

I love this part. You're writing really pulls me in.
Smart-chan chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
The very last paragraph was extremely powerful and there was just something... beautiful about it.

Great piece of writing :'D
suns and stars chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
good one
boriqua522 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
wow that was very powerful. it was very intense and i loved it. thanks, hope to read more of your work.
RK chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
A powerful look inside Justin's mind. Keep up the great work!
icaughtkira chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Oh I love it, you write so beautifully that every sentence draws me in further until I'm lost in the words. It's amazing, and I hope you continue to write for this. :)
reiselust161 chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
this is so intense, thanks for your imagination and ability to put it into wonderful words. Cant wait for more!