Reviews for My Everything, a Twilight Soap Opera of Extreme Length |
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Guest chapter 52 . 2/14/2011 My mums 4 foot 8 btw :) |
ja4ever chapter 71 . 2/14/2011 Exactly. Lol. She really does need to have more confidence in herself, Jas and their relationship. At least that sex thing i out of her mind. Thank God! I guess they're young and her insecurities are valid but I'm pretty sure Jasper would never leave her. Both Matt and Mara need to back the hell off! I don't know about this whole Zac thing though. I don't know if he's going to do anything. Anyway, amazing job! Loved it! Glad they finally went to the dance! Keep it up! |
MACMONKEY chapter 71 . 2/12/2011 loved it and cant wait to see what trouble finds alice next :) |
LuckyCharms19 chapter 71 . 2/12/2011 Hey Charli I feel so bad for Alice, she's so insecure and for no reason too, she's awesome...It was nice to see that Jazz didn't go all caveman over the confrontation with Matt lol though I did want to hit him myself XD...another quick review but I loved it :) keept it up |
ja4ever chapter 70 . 2/12/2011 Glad that Ali is seeing a new doctor even though the medicine isn't helping hopefully the new one will. I can understand where she's coming from with not telling her family. But hopefully it gets better. Glad she and Rose got to have some girl time and got dresses for the dance. She should stop thinking about having sex with Jas because it's not going to happen. That's not the only way to show him you love him. I think if he was going to leave her he would have already. Even though he says he won't. They seriously need to talk. Amazing job Keep it up! Loved it! P.S. What happened to Alice's mom? |
kykyxstandler chapter 71 . 2/12/2011 love it hate mara i just wanna smack her |
Darkened Ruby chapter 71 . 2/12/2011 In the next chapter i have a feeling that the whole situation is gonna explode in their faces |
Sucker For Jalice chapter 71 . 2/12/2011 Mara, Mara, Mara... that sperm-dumpster. When will learn Jazzy is off limits. Ugh! I think it's time I'd brought out my butcher knife. :) And Alice shouldn't feel so insecure. I know she's very young (We all were 13 once) But I'm sure as she gets older, she'll realize how beautiful and special she is while Mara suffers from an STD. Hehe! I think if Ali ever tries out for the cheerleading squad, she'd give Mara a run for her money. I don't hope so...I know so :D Charli, this chappie was freakin' awesome! I can't wait for the next one! X0- Penny! Ps: This is the longest review I've ever given. I'll shut up now, Hehe! |
AmPm chapter 71 . 2/12/2011 Zac likes Alice dosen't a ponpom sqad? whats the difference between themand cheerleaders? English remember? |
WhitlockRox chapter 71 . 2/12/2011 AWWWWWW, happy ending so sweet |
DarlinYoureMean chapter 71 . 2/12/2011 I agree with Rose, her little insecurity act is getting old! Well, I say that coming from a point of super insecurity and having been told that before. "Confidence is sexy", someone should tell Alice that. PS I gave a little cheer for hot dogs and mac n cheese. Cos even though my hubby calls it "white trash" I LOVE putting hot dogs in my mac n cheese. |
deltagirl74 chapter 71 . 2/11/2011 I wish Alice would listen to Rose more. Hormones will kill this relationship before Alice or Jasper does. |
AmPm chapter 8 . 2/11/2011 Heya! I just remembered Alice's real mum. (I spell things differently than you, 'cause I'm in London) She lent the money to her,stupidly. Is that for when Alice is about to go to college and theres no money? SO MANY EVENTS COMNG IN ALL AT ONCE! Xx-AmPm-xX |
WhitlockRox chapter 70 . 2/10/2011 I LOOOOOOOVVVVVVEEEEEEEDDDDDDD IIIIITTTTTT |
ja4ever chapter 69 . 2/10/2011 I'm Seth is in the band now and he's having fun. Zac seems like he's going to be great friend to Alice. Even though he wants to be more. At least he's going to protect her from Mara. I hope they have fun at the dance. Again with the nightmares! And now during the day. hope Alice will be okay. She scared me with that panic attack she was having. They aren't allowing her to function properly. I don't know what they're going to do. Amazing job though! Keep it up! Jasper was being really sweet and their date until he wanted more. he needs to get himself in check! Rose and Em weren't doing that! Loved it! Especially the funny bits! |