i loooooved the chapter! it took me roughly a week and a half to finally get here and im loving it! you officially are on my alerts and favorites:)

hi, sorry i haven't reviewed before, although i read the story straight away when you published..but i have to say it took me three times to read it fully, i was sick and just couldn't keep my eyes long on the mobile phone or computer screen..but i'm all good, so i'm back to review! :D

either way i loved the chapter :) I like that Alice is getting better at saying no and not doing every whim of Jasper ;D

Glad Rose is happy, even though there was a bit of dark moment when she found out about Emmett going away, but i'm glad they talked and figured everything out. Not sure that i understand Jasper's reaction to Emmett going away..i know they were close, but come on they weren't that close..even Alice who is so attached to Emmett because he always was a real brother to her and really loved her, unlike Edward, didn't react that bad..she cried, she didn't understand at first but she was probably more upset that she found out the last and not from Emmett...no, really, i was reading and didn't get Jasper's reaction whatsoever...to freeze like that. i was jsut feeling sorry for Alice because she was being hard on herself for accidentally telling the secret, she didn't know that it was one and for Rosalie, because i could understand what was going through her head, they slept together and he is leaving and didn't tell her that, but all is alright with those two so i'm happy! good that Emmett didn't let Rosalie be her usual self and just run off without hearing an explanation. ;))

oh i'm also glad that Ali talked with Rose and won't be thinking that she has to have sex with Jasper just because Rose and Emmett already did. For all i care she can wait until she is married :))) and in process make Jasper wait too, he won't die not having sex for sure :P;DD

the dance..i'm really not sure why Alice cannot go to the dance with other guy or even with Matt. Big deal Jasper will be hurt, why everyone always says to her don't do that or that because Jasper will be hurt? why no one ever says to Jasper that? that she will be hurt, that she is constantly hurting because he is flirting with all the girls around? ok, he is being nice, but the point is that every other girl wants him, this Mara too! and no, no one tells him to stop being friends with her because it's hurting Alice or at least to try to communicate with her less..but just Alice thinks to talk to Matt or go to dance and it's a HUGE deal, because poor Jasper will be hurt..pfff..he needs to learn to control his temper, to understand that Alice may have other candidates to her heart that will treat her good, that will pay attention to her when they are together even though they are surrounded by friends or other people. Jasper had/has a tendency to forget that Alice exists when they are out together but there is group members, friends, fans and similar around, especially of there are girls. actually in those cases everyone tends to forget that there is Alice there also :((( maybe then (if she goes out with someone else) Jasper will start really trying to heal and to control himself and respect Alice and won't forget her even though they are surrounded by other people, won't stop paying attention to her just because Mara is suddenly here and oh most importantly listen to what Alice has to say and won't dismiss it instantly. how jasper is oblivious in Mara's attempts and Alice pain because of it, i will never know..well probably it just shows that he doesn't pay that much of attention to Alice as it seems or he wants to seem.

well at least in this chapter they seemed more or less happy :) Alice still isn't very confident, but she is getting there and thats great! :))

probably i said everything, don't remember now if i wanted to say something more lol

well i really hope next chapter is soon!

*claps* Yay, update! I'm glad Rose didn't have a full blown aneurysm over the early college thing. I was scared for a minute there.

Omg omg,

Thank you soooo much for updating.

I love this chapter, in so happy that Jas and Ali are talking, I was so happy but when Ali announced that emmett was leaving I got a bit sad:( then everything got better:)

I'm so proud of Ali, and escpecially Jas, they're growing up *tear* lol

What happened to Mary? Is she gonna be in the story soon? I hope so.

How about superman and superwoman for Emmett and rose haha

How's jasmine?

Anyways, epic chapter

Keep posting

MelXoX

great chapter :D

love it can't wait to know what their costumes will be and i hope mara would die somehow like spontaniously combuste or something gosh i'm mean oh well she's a bitch can't wait to read more

Hey Charli!

I gotta say, seeing an update on here really made my day. I've been sick for the past few days so reading the next chapter made me feel a bit better :) and a bonus: Jasper wasn't a total ass in this one! XD Great job, can't wait to read what comes next.

I liked Alice and Jasper in this chapter. This is the first chapter in a while where Alice didn't seem like a brat and Jasper wasn't jumping to conclusions. I loved that for once Alice wasn't focused on her spilling Em's secret and realized that Jasper needed taking care of. I liked that Jasper got some support with B/R pleading his case. I hope out of all of this that Alice realizes that while Jasper has anger issues, she has manipulated him many times which is just as harmful. Maybe these two need therapy together.

Congraulations for the Emmett-Rose scene!it seemed too realistic!:D

Hi, sorry for being so late, I read it first though. When are you going to update? You say that you'll update in a week and its been like a little over a month! Charli! I'm still sorry about your loss though. Just so happens my best friends grandma died today. I knew him so well, he was so nice and lovely.

Anyway, please update! :) Again sorry about the late review.

Xx-Kiwi0-Xx

naww cutee

they kinda sorta made up (:

update soon !

Nice first chapter. I was definitely drawn in from the first paragraph. This is definitely a keeper!

Hi Charli!

First off, my sincere apologies for your loss, I know it's rough losing someone close to you.

Secondly, awesome chapter, the transformation of Alice between the first few chapters and now is incredible. Jasper still needs a good smack upside the head though :p

Take your time, your personal life is more important than our impatience

Your avid fan,

Lucky

I'm on the edge of my seat! I love it! Very twisted and intense. Please update again soon

I don't know why but I'm always sympathetic to Jasper while Alice frustrates me. Jasper is trying so hard to make up for his mistakes and he gets very little credit. When Jasper finds out that Alice kept her communication with her mother a secret and Brent knew about it, he's going to be angry but also so hurt. His biggest fear is Alice leaving him and that is what that secret will look like to him. I'm glad Esme took the time to talk to him. I think everyone expects J/A to work things out eventually. I think they kinda need a physical break from each other for a while. They are too wrapped up in each other's lives and they need some space.