Reviews for Two destinies
Peacexfreedom chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
very dark

your english was good (better than some native-english speakers lol)

sad, but good writing ;)
moonhorse2 chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
this is beautiful *cries*
Beizanten chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
This is really sad. if Merlin is willing to wait for Arthur, Arthur will surely realize one day but he just have to kill himself. it's not Arthur fault he marry for his people. Great story. Merlin is really selfless always giving and never expect anything in return
The Flame in All of Us chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Noo! Merlin! *cries along with Arthur* This story was so beautiful...*cries*
UnKnowning10 chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
that was just beautiful, i was crying at the end, Merlin loved arthur but couldn't take the prince not knowing, and him not loving merlin back so he puts an end to his pain only he doesn't notice that the prince he so loved, loved him back.

great plot and awesome story :)

X Chrissie X
Missing Piece chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
you have reduced me to tears thats was lovely well not lovely well yeah it it was albeit sad well written loved it xx
Poemwriter98 chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
I love this. It's an amazingly beautiful. You did a great job.