|Reviews for Halloween PT2|
| Martin III chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
The lack of proper grammar makes this too difficult to read. The story also makes very little sense, thanks in part to the numerous nonsensical statements(e.g. "I didn't mean this to them like that.", "Elendia thinks for such foolish reasons!"", ""Ein are you crazy? the King of lands is extremely superior..."). In short, the fic is unreadable as it stands.