|Reviews for Last Tango in Forks|
| jt1972 chapter 11 . 7/1/2010
This was a well written, albeit a bit of a sad topic, but, i think IMO you did it justice and you didn't weigh entirely on the actual major point/emotions of it, but, I am with ya... and understand what you mean by this had to happen; not sure why? but, I trust ya!
okay so any ways... I was going to be all pouty and be missing This Edward... but, you did right by me, I got a tiny taste; granted even a HUGE taste of him would NEVER be enough (HA HA HA) I still appreciate him being in there even if a small part.
looking forward to the next chapter!
| beckybrit chapter 10 . 7/1/2010
I thought it was fab!
Although I don't think I will be looking at butter in quite the same way again, lol.
| beckybrit chapter 9 . 7/1/2010
I was wondering what he woukld say to the ring! Glad to see he didnt disappoint, lol. She needs to ditch Jake soon, even if she thinks Edward is only temporary! Him & Charlie are starting to annoy me too, poor Bella!
awesome ( I mean fuck hot, obviously) chapter!
| beckybrit chapter 8 . 7/1/2010
She's not so shy anymore is she! lol.
I loved that chapter!
| Lee723 chapter 7 . 6/30/2010
Well, if you stayed up late at night to finish this one, let me tell you IT WAS WORTH EVERY BIT OF SLEEP YOU LOST. *snicker*
I'm beyond hot and sweaty now, lol.
That was hot shit, and YES! OMFG, they are getting attached.
Can we kick Jake to the curb, now?
Pretty PLEASE? With cherries on top? ;)
No? okk...*sigh* :P
Um, I'm gonna go swoon in the corner over a shirtless Edward...la la la
| Lee723 chapter 6 . 6/30/2010
SO close! and yet so frigging far!
If only he was paying attention! He would have seen her.
Wow, Bella was all naughty in this chap.
Loved the brazen behaviour.
Loved the ending as well ;)
| Lee723 chapter 5 . 6/30/2010
Revelations. I love it.
So, they had a horrible marriage, but he still considered Tanya his friend.
Oh man, Edward's been in pain for years because of her.
I can't forgive that behaviour.
Even for a woman that took her own life. She did it to get attention so to speak. This is one action that can't be undone.
There's no coming back from death.
I'm understanding Edward more and more.
| Lee723 chapter 4 . 6/30/2010
"Is that it?" he moaned, already wanting to explode from the way her inner muscles were gripping him tightly. "Is that your spot, baby?" -Um...*THUD* *DED* :P
JFC, I am DIEDED. That was...*drops ice cube down shirt* lol. ;)
UNG-MAY-ZING. loved it!
| Lee723 chapter 3 . 6/30/2010
I figured he was mourning the loss of his significant other.
Suicide, I'm guessing. Poor thing, he had to see all of that.
His relationship with his parents/family seem strained.
He's been away from them for almost or about a decade?
That is some serious space he put between them.
I honestly did not find the ending disturbing.
To be honest the part that had me raising my eyebrows was when he sucked his fingers while sitting in the car. I REALLY hoped no one would see him. That would be AWKWARD, lol.
Enjoying your fic more and more as I read, sweets!
| Lee723 chapter 2 . 6/30/2010
OMFG, I'm having a major freak out on twitter as I read.
She's...oh, wait, that was um, *eh hem* prettyfuckinghawt, btw.:P
Ok, so back to Bella, she's ENGAGED to JACOB?
oh no, oh no, I may faint. Cannot handle that pairing...I HOPE I'm overreacting. PLEASE tell me I'm overreacting, bb.
*angstburn*...this is like heartburn, except, you get it when you read too much sad/angsty fic. *grabs chest*
It was awesome all in all!
I'm DEF reading more!
| Lee723 chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
My interest piqued at the scene with the beautiful young man sitting on the floor with the bloodshot eyes...
you PULLED me in at "You can let me fuck you"...*thud*
Wah wah What? :O
ZOMG! *runs to read next chappie*
| DeeDreamer chapter 11 . 6/30/2010
So sad for Rose, but I loved your ending so much. *sigh* xo DD
| MEL24FAN chapter 2 . 6/30/2010
Eww Bella is marrying Jake. I'll try to forget about that for now.
| Aylah50 chapter 11 . 6/30/2010
This was amazing. You are amazing. I have no words.
| MEL24FAN chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
I've never seen the movie so this will all be a surprise for me. Well I am definitly intrigued.