|Reviews for Last Tango in Forks|
| mommakal chapter 7 . 6/9/2010
This chapter was HAWT! Yum for paint splattered Edward!
And I really liked their little connection at the end over her t-shirts. Yes, I like the slow bonding I see.
| MamaMel415 chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Loving your story so far, I can't wait to see what happens next... Oh and by the way you write some of the best lemons I have read here on FanFic!
| Swino chapter 8 . 6/9/2010
Oh Wow. Thanks to AllyinPerth for reccing your FF on twitter. I had to keep reading into the early hrs of the morning this morning to get through your 8 chapters. Now I cant wait for the next update!
Not only is it full of lemony goodness - very hot, makes me feel like I need to turn the fan on in the middle of winter, but also a very detailed and well written story dealing with two characters who need someone else to allow them to break free of their issues/loneliness.
I can see why Bella jumped at having Edward in her life, if I had a finance who showed the interest jake does I would be out the door, but she is obviously just moving through life and not living it - until Edward comes along.
The Edward story is so compelling, I can see why he wants to keep Bella to himself and not deal with a real relationship, but I wonder how long it is before he realises she has gotten under his skin and he cant let her go back to her normal life.
Looking forward to seeing when they come face to face in reality.
| mommakal chapter 6 . 6/9/2010
Never heard of that movie, but love Napolean so will have to keep an eye out for it.
I love the message Bella left for him! What a tease for him.
And ugh, Jake seems like such a loser! Poor girl needs to get away from him and Billy.
Damn the near miss with the limo. I would have loved for Edward to hear a little more about his 'stranger'.
And I must ask...what does LITF mean? Is there meaning to that or just a means of breaking up your POV's?
| nvrsrry chapter 8 . 6/8/2010
I love this fic already. Just started reading today and I'm hooked. I'm looking forward to some more!
| Biena chapter 8 . 6/8/2010
Just found your story and love it so far...
They are so getting attached to each other...
And I cant wait to hear more about Tanya...and also Jacob...
Do you have an update-schedule?
| hnwhitlock2000 chapter 8 . 6/8/2010
I found this on twilighted forum...so far so good!
| SDL.077 chapter 2 . 6/8/2010
eww, i lost my interest.. u just have to WARN people that ur gonna have some bella&jacob in the story.. some of us dont have the stomach for that
apart from that u have really good writing skills
| LysiaNicole chapter 8 . 6/8/2010
I am really loving this story so far. Especially the anonimoity between Bella and Edward. It makes me excited for all the reveals that will probably come. Can't wait for more. 3
| mommakal chapter 5 . 6/8/2010
So it was a suicide. She seems to have been a very troubled girl trying to take Edward down with her. I'm looking forward to E&B facing eachother again, !d learning what a small town Forks really is. Since she knows the Cullens so well, is it possible she doesn't know Edward at all? I want them to at least start addressing eachother by name.
| Bleriana chapter 6 . 6/8/2010
I almost expected a sudden meeting at the funeral march. After all Rose saw Bella and she was in the same car as Edward.
Glad it didnt happen though...
And... Uhm... Has mastrubating always been this hawt? Js
| Bleriana chapter 5 . 6/8/2010
this chapter was very sad... Seems like my assumptions were right. She killed herself indeed.
I want to fucking hug Edward so bad right now... Poor baby...
Its great to see that u can write things like this just as good as smut!
| Bleriana chapter 4 . 6/8/2010
Holy mother of fuck!
Uhm... I am speechless.
Hawt! Hawt! Hawt!
I should thank Rose for getting me to read it...
This was def worth it!
| Bleriana chapter 3 . 6/8/2010
I'll make it quick this time:
I've never read a hawter 3rd person POV... Honestly!
I feel sooo sorry for Eddie. Seems like he's been damaged a lot... I can kind of guess what happened, but I am not too sure...
I already love this story like fuck!
| Bleriana chapter 2 . 6/8/2010
wedding? As in Jakes and Bella's wedding? Holy fuck!
That means trouble. Big, big trouble...
P.s. This chapter was not safe for lunch period. Please to be warning us in ur next A/N...