|Reviews for Last Tango in Forks|
| RaeCullen chapter 2 . 5/28/2010
Damn it's just one surprise after another with this fic! Love it! )
| TessLouise chapter 7 . 5/28/2010
Yup, pretty steamy. :)
| maria2906 chapter 7 . 5/28/2010
awwwww they're starting to connect even more! Having things in common,sharing stories while having fuckhot make out sessions and sex!ugh I love love love this story! I cannot wait for another chapter, I don't know how often you update or how long the story will be, but I'll patiently wait until the new chapter comes!
| maria2906 chapter 6 . 5/28/2010
Bella and Jacob's relationship is clearly in the beginning of its end..there is no connection there,only mediocre routine..oh wow oh wow oh wow! There are no words for how hot that was! She is a little minx!
God I love how affected by her he is!He craves her so badly, I adore stories with such intensity, my heart pounds like crazy with each scene that involves these two gah!
what would be even more freaking hot would be a scene with a possessive jealous Edward staking his claim on Bella and just showing her who owns her body and soul! gah just thinking about that has me all worked up! Your Edward is freaking hot and just imagining him feeling threatened and needing desperately to claim Bella is just amazing!
| maria2906 chapter 5 . 5/28/2010
ugh this chapter broke my heart :( what the hell was Tanya's problem? Was she a bipolar?Was she suffering from depression?Jesus for Edward to be stuck in a marriage like that :/ so horrible..and now to be left with the guilt, she was really really out of her mind to do this :/
My heart hurts for him, I am so incredibly glad that he has found Bella :)
| maria2906 chapter 4 . 5/28/2010
holy fuck that was perfection! I die when he calls her "baby", I honestly just gah, I think it's one of the hottest things ever!
these two are just fireworks whenever they see each other, I really hope you put more and more scenes like this, the desperation and need for each other is so tangible, I adore it! Every little move they make, how he's obsessed with her scent,everything is just perfect and crazy hot!
| maria2906 chapter 3 . 5/28/2010
I absolutely love Edward's character!
He seems so broken and yet so very kind at the same time. What his past had stored for him has somewhat destroyed his faith in life but thankfully he found his goddess! I love it when he calls her that! I also really like how you've portrayed the Cullens,they're such nice ppl! So we found a connection between Edward and Bella outside their little nest! I wonder what will happen when they see each other in the outside circle! That's going to be veryyyy interesting! I haven't seen the movie so I'm walking blindly here,which I love to be honest! I really like not knowing what will happen even if I know that you won't be sticking to the movie's plot :)
| maria2906 chapter 2 . 5/28/2010
holy craaaaaaaap..that was by far one of the hottest things ever! ugh just thinking about it has me getting worked up lol!
They seem to have clicked from the moment they saw each other, the energy and intensity between them is undeniable!
ugh stupid Jacob,always in the middle!I'm sorry Jake but you can't deny it when you've met your soul mate,and the way E/B reacted when they first saw each other screams that!
| maria2906 chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
.GOD...I just read all the chapters and I'm starting to review them,I couldn't do it while I was reading cause I was too eager to go to the next chapter immediately :P
It made me so incredibly sad the way you describe Edward's state in this chapter..my heart hurt for him :( your way of writing is just amazing,so poetic and yet not contrived, just perfect!
| OmniaVincitAmor.ERA chapter 6 . 5/27/2010
ok, i really really am liking this story. haven't read much like this before. very...refreshing and hott as fuck, i love it.
| OmniaVincitAmor.ERA chapter 4 . 5/27/2010
jaimearkin req this fix to me, and my god do i fucking love it. amazing.
| Fictionators chapter 7 . 5/27/2010
Congrats from The Fictionators! Your story was featured this week in our Fictionator Friday recs.
| SaraK622 chapter 7 . 5/27/2010
Love love love this story. You write excellent lemons and I cannot wait to see what happens next!
| twilightheaded23 chapter 7 . 5/27/2010
i just found this story, and welllllll, IT IS AWESOME. What a steamy/hot/raw concept. Clearly things will blow up in some sort of extreme way, but my word. *fans self* looooooves it! :) Very creative and smexy.
Can't wait for more 3
| Purple'sCool chapter 7 . 5/27/2010
Good Lord, woman!
No words for that. In the words of 'book' Bella..."Holy Crow!" Well actually it is more like your name says, "Awesome Sauce!"
I WILL be rereading this chapter again before bed tonight! By far one of the hottest things I've read in a while.