|Reviews for Last Tango in Forks|
| twilightheaded23 chapter 4 . 5/27/2010
one of the hottest thing's i've read in a while... i'll write more when i've caught up, but had to say that!
| ComplexWonder chapter 7 . 5/27/2010
I was rec'd this story by a few ladies on twitter today (just as I'm sure others were). And Holy fuck! It was a hot sexy read! I LOVE this story so far and I cant wait for more. I wonder what's going to happen with Jake and how Bella and Edward's relationship will start changing, because he may not want to know names but I can see him getting attached already.
Great job! :)
| trixietraci chapter 7 . 5/27/2010
Holy mother of UNF. Someone rec'd this story on Twitter today (I think it was WindowWardsGirl, but I could be wrong) & I read the whole 7 chapters on my phone when I should have been sleeping.
I LOVE it so far; it's HOT and the plot is really different. I'm anxious to see what happens w/ Jake and also how B & E try to keep their "relationship" NOT a relationship. ;)
| hatreehouse chapter 7 . 5/27/2010
Hot Hot HOt! These are some of the best lemons i have ever read! Dear lord I need a drink or a cold shower hell maybe both.
Cant wait for more!
| babyo chapter 7 . 5/27/2010
Holy Hell! I would say this one was one of the top 5 hottest I have ever read - great job. I can't wait for the next chapter. I love that sexually frustrated is Bella is a total bitch!
| orion03981 chapter 7 . 5/26/2010
ok that was soooooo hott! wow! looking forward to the next update! i hope it's real soon!
| jarkin33 chapter 7 . 5/26/2010
ok so I got rec'd this fic by someone on twitter and she said not to even bother w/panties cuz they are useless.. TRUEFAX.. .Just saying!
This fic is hot and steamy and I love that they aren't sharing names with each other. It is giving Bella the freedom to be sexy and sensual and demand what she wants which she is obviously not getting at home with jake. Poor Edward.. he comes across as kind of arrogant at some points but I don't think that's intentional.
SO - after quickly reading through the first 7 chaps I'm totally going to be fangirling over you. Just giving you fair warning! Can't wait to see what happens in the coming chapters!
| Emma613 chapter 7 . 5/26/2010
Another great much as I love to read about thier love making...its cool that they are getting to know one another 2.I still like the no names thing...I believe it just could be a way to get to know someones true ..if I may...I was wondering about would happen if he got a little amorous w/ Bella as she was leaving to go to Edward?Or even after she had come home from being w/ her beautiful stranger?I think about this story...just as I did Blood and looking forward to the next
| byhelenahandbasket chapter 7 . 5/26/2010
I just blew through all 7 chapters just now and WOW - steamy and sexy to an extreme with a tantalizing hint of great plot points to come that keeps me wanting more.
| Snowball64 chapter 7 . 5/26/2010
How the hell does this story keep getting hotter? I swear to God that one day I'm going to read the latest chapter and my boyfriend is going to find a big pile of ashes in front of my laptop. You're a very talented female Awesome...with a very dirty mind. I think I'm in crush with you. *mwah*
| BeatrizBeltran chapter 7 . 5/26/2010
I love your story, I can not wait for more.
But I really really hope that you do not finish it as the movie.
| CullenLovin226 chapter 7 . 5/26/2010
Alright Miss Saucypants, you wanted honest huh? That shit was SOOOOO HOTTTTTTT! I cannot believe what reading this story does to my girly bits...sorry, but you did say to be honest! I actually wait for my hubbs to go to work before I read an update from you! Don't get me wrong, I have PLENTY of sexy as hell, lemony stories on my favs that get pretty much the same reaction out of me. That being said, I think it's the naughty, taboo of your story that turns me OUT! It's seeing Bella do (I'm sure I'm not the only one) what I dream of doing on a daily basis...hmmm, I guess that was TMI! Well, again with the honesty) I guess if "the job" was done right lately, I would never need the visual and mental stimulation I find here! Great job...again! Now if you'll excuse me, I am on my way to see if there is a back street entrance to my gym! Until next time, Theresa
| Edward's Eternal chapter 7 . 5/26/2010
Fucking excellent chapter...
steamy enough ? hmmm not sure... let me wipe the condensation off my glasses and think about it...
They are getting rather attached aren't they ?
This is gonna be good ! and no doubt angsty along the way...
my fav !
Well worth the lack of sleep( well for me anyway)- great stuff !
| atbatbatb chapter 7 . 5/26/2010
| joayla chapter 7 . 5/26/2010
Thank you for staying up late to write this I showed
my thanks with the finger porn lol!
Ok now on to the reveiw! That was hot hot hot! And yes I think this is going to be hard for them both!
I think Bella needs to go on a well deserved lunch break at work I think she could get to the flat have a quickie and back to work without anyone noticing right? Nurse uniform remember ! I think eddie might like it from the gym gear!
Love you Hun!