|Reviews for Heartbeats|
| cumberling chapter 1 . 5/28
It's raining here...
| Elise chapter 1 . 5/20
Oh God why... *cries* effing heartbreaking. I couldn't help but feel so happy at the start even if I had been warned this was a sad fic...
I just can't deal with the thought of parents losing a child that was meant to bring them so much joy :'(
| biddle29 chapter 1 . 5/16
I'm crying right now :'(
| PJOloverforeva74 chapter 1 . 1/1
It's sad but well written
| waddiwasiwitch chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
You really like to make people cry don't you. I like that they named the child for Edward.
| The Land Of Water chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
This is one of the most beautiful story about two of my favourite characters, it has intensity and emotions. I must say I've never imagined something like that could happen to them, not like this and it's cruel itself but can be also something real. I loved how you described Roy's reaction and all is sooo heartbreaking. I felt really sorry for them but this is what fanfictions are about, telling other stories that can reache your heart.
| Lilyzinha chapter 1 . 9/17/2014
wow this was so sad but also perfect
| Windy Silvermist chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
I love this its so sad, but in like a cute way...if that makes sense. Was it by any chance vaguely inspired by Heartbeats by José González? Not the words but like the tune is reminiscent...the titles are similar.
| AllBlue.is.myNinjaWay chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
I cried at the end. Pure brilliance. Allow me to hug you. *hugs you*
| Jaricchi chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
That's true. My best friend did that when she heard her mother died and when she was done she just shut down. Never cried until years later.
I loved this story so much and the baby.../sob
I'm a sucker for these kind of stories. Thank you so much for sharing. :)
It was utter beauty.
| PaintedPetrichor chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
This is one of my favorite fanfictions: I keep a copy on my eReader and have read it more than several times. I apologize for not writing a reviewing sooner, I'm not very good about writing them!
The bittersweet feel of this story is handled well- It does the story and circumstances justice without going overboard. It's short and sweet (Well, not so much sweet) and easy to go back to again. The characters are very well portrayed and it easily meshes with canon.
| CarolinaEirasSa chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
One of the best one-shots I've ever read :)
Everyone was perfectly in character. Even though we never saw anything similar to this I could perfectly imagine this happening in cannon.
Why did it have to be so sad? :'( :'( :'( *bawling*
| Yuu3 chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
Sniff. I love it. Yup, crying now. Real tears. Love how you ended it too. I love it whole story, every single part of it. The names were awesome. I love it. Hic. Damn...Im smiling yet crying and i can't say anything else than I love this story...
| QueenMilaAshdown chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
so sad, yet very well written
| Trigzl chapter 1 . 5/30/2013
Very sad, but beautiful. I thought it was very, I don't know the right word for it; but I loved that mustang named the child after Ed. It's even sadder now that the child didn't survive because it had a name and he would've been a great Edward.