Reviews for Shards
Namikaze Uzumaki Potter chapter 10 . 11/26
Awesome! Please update this story. You write good. Can't wait enough to see the upcoming confrontation between the Leaf nin and Kumo. Keep up the good work!
Guest chapter 10 . 9/14
Not sure where you are, not sure how your doing.
But i am only just now reading this story,
And i gotta say, im impressed.
If your not gonna continue it, which likely seems the case, pls find a good author to have adopt it, give them a quick run down on what you were thinking of doing, and see where it goes from there.
Might even try to get them to give you a variety of short stories to compare and see who pulls it off best.
I genuinely think this thing is worth the effort.
YeTianshi chapter 3 . 9/9
Why did you take away the most hacks ability Naruto had? The shadow clone jutsu helped him learn the rasen-shuriken in record time! While it's true that the mizubunshin is elementally easier for him, the shadow clone doesn't have an element, the only reason people don't use it is because of the high chakra consumption that's basically not even a problem for Naruto.
Silent Analyst chapter 10 . 2/10
Interesting
Silent Analyst chapter 9 . 2/10
Jealously inbound
Silent Analyst chapter 8 . 2/10
I dont know how I feel about the one chasing Zetsu. Kinda like Halli alone.
Silent Analyst chapter 6 . 2/10
Glad Naruto was punished
Silent Analyst chapter 5 . 2/10
Hallibel too good. :)
Silent Analyst chapter 4 . 2/10
Love it so far.
Silent Analyst chapter 3 . 2/10
Ay he did it.
Silent Analyst chapter 2 . 2/8
I love it. I love Hallibel, and I love the story already.
Silent Analyst chapter 1 . 2/8
Interesting start.
Nihatclodra chapter 10 . 12/16/2016
... That's an utter bullshit cliffhanger to stop at for over 4 years... just when this fanfic was getting good too... dammit!
Nihatclodra chapter 7 . 12/16/2016
You gave Neliel to Orochimaru!? You bastard!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 10 . 12/11/2016
Great work! Loving this! Update again asap!
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