Reviews for Shards
jeanette9a chapter 10 . 8/16/2015
too bad that walking on air thing would be pretty useful in that trap.(ah i'm sure Tia has something up her sleeve.)
well you could use the water molecules in the air to walk on, hey that reminds me of a song (I Can Walk On Water I Can Fly)
i might be a little scatter brained, but at least it was a good idea, and i will never know if it would work or not until he tries it on your behest.
by the way i love your idea for this story!
Guest chapter 10 . 6/22/2015
Dude add more it's a great story so far
gearworks of ff chapter 10 . 5/13/2015
well worth the read, but the writer does leave you hangin
perhaps this muse went to sleep, at least the author is still writing
keep up the good work
Rongis chapter 3 . 5/10/2015
Who ever reads this review PLEASE DON'T READ THIS FANFIC
Nung282 chapter 2 . 4/25/2015
Love the story. Hope you update it soon.
I am the Bird of Hermes chapter 1 . 4/24/2015
Pretty good! Looking forward to reading the rest of it!
gearworks of ff chapter 10 . 4/15/2015
enjoying the combination of shadowskill with bleach for history and detailing
then smoothly combining into naruto
good work

hope the writers block has not made the writing muse move on
Chi Kuro chapter 10 . 3/29/2015
plz continue, i have whanted an update for years!
Scorpio2696 chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
Come on man I will beg if I have to so plz continue
Berlioz Chaos Lord of Khorne chapter 10 . 3/11/2015
... So you ever gonna update? Cus it's kinda sad to see a story this good just go "Bai Bai!.
Death's Cold Touch chapter 10 . 3/10/2015
Please update it has been a good fanfiction so far
AuraAngeloid chapter 10 . 3/7/2015
Amazing! i love it Please UPDATE!
sorry for begging i just love it
Narutofqn11 chapter 10 . 2/14/2015
You should honestly consider finishing this story. I have been addicted to it ever since I started reading it. It truly is an amazing story written by a truly gifted author. Keep up the good work -
Doom Marine 54 chapter 1 . 2/4/2015
So in your mind Naruto is better if he's some boring emotionless overpowered gary-stu? Glad you were never a writer for Naruto.
narmulti chapter 10 . 1/30/2015
Good story keep it up and UPDATE SOON
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