|Reviews for The Path To Redemption|
| Xiaou Nem chapter 12 . 2/16
Nice to see everything working out for the best. I like how Sailor Valiant's story turned out.
| Xiaou Nem chapter 3 . 2/16
Wow, would I have loved to read what was said during that marketing meeting. And how did they react when they called them to make an appointment? Side-story to this would be awesome!
| Xiaou Nem chapter 2 . 2/16
Interesting! Maybe Usagi's father can help out? Hehe.
I like Ami's conscientiousness and this is an area where nepotism can get in the way of good medical practice.
Somehow, I thought Ami was going to continue with medical research and not just practice. I can't see her, with her specialized Mercury skills and thirst for knowledge, just working in a hospital...
| Xiaou Nem chapter 1 . 2/16
A bit overwhelmed here - even two of the storylines would have been enough. I care about all the characters so much already. I didn't need the new enemy storyline just now, but of course I'll read on. *grins*
I'm still thinking about Kenji getting a job and everything from the previous stories. How Makoto is getting along as a mother, how Akiko is doing in school, how Junko is handling all the stress after being assaulted, how Usagi and Mamoru feel in their new apartment, how Rei is getting along with the new priest. Where to meet if the Hikawa Jinja isn't so convenient any more. What to do about their identities. How Hana Saito is doing. How the criminals are doing. The gang meeting up with Haruna-sensei again... The list is endless! As you see, I really enjoyed all of these "a day in the life of" of all of the senshi. I felt as if I haven't heard from Ami's mother in a while as well. And what is Shingo doing?
By the way: I spotted a continuity error. I am reading your stories in order, and in one of the previous ones Ami started working in Mamoru's private practice, but here she's back in the hospital. We never did find out which specialization she chose in the hospital. I imagine she should have a talk with her mother about that. And about going into private practice... Ok, now I want to continue reading!
| Ducks-Go-Aflack chapter 12 . 7/21/2010
Another good story, I'd say. There was a lot going on, and you managed to pull it all together, but only just. The side stories with Ami and Minako didn't esspescialy fit with the main plot thread. An even then, in between chapters 11 and 12, the two side plots basacaly were all 'we got solved while you weren't looking', or something.
On another note, it *was* a rather happy-go-lucky ending. This is fine, for a SM fic, but sometimes I get tired of happy endings. Sometimes I want bittersweet. (Incidentally, having Sailor Valient birth her whole race again while Sailor Galaxia pays eternal penance is not bittersweet. I just don't care enough about those characters to feel emotion for what happens to them).
For the next fic, how about a more dangerous enemy? One that is so strong, that it even requires a sequel, or maybe even three parts? Or maybe rather than just one dangerous enemies, multiple dangerous enemies? The sort of fic style I am wanting is the one where you had everyone die and chibi-usa had to go back in time to fix everything. Something like that.
Anyway, thanks for another great fic. I look forwards to your next work!
| AngelMoon Girl chapter 12 . 7/10/2010
Yay, happy ending! Another little treasure, Bill, filled with twists and character development abound. *Bow* Eagerly anticipating your next installment!
| James Birdsong chapter 12 . 7/10/2010
The world thanks you for the five chapters Bill K.
| petiyaka chapter 12 . 7/10/2010
I really like Akiko. This little girl is so fun!
| BlueLion chapter 12 . 7/10/2010
Well done, this one goes to my favs and into my community...
| PriestessHelene chapter 11 . 7/8/2010
LOL Usagi you are soo kawaii! Thank you Bill.
| Deep Serenity chapter 11 . 7/6/2010
I really like this story, I like when Serena has to do stuff on her own...though..you keep her so sweet LOL
and I liked the other folks story too. Good job!
| dainlord chapter 11 . 7/3/2010
Oh dear , Oh dear! How in the world is usagi going to get home?
| AngelMoon Girl chapter 11 . 7/3/2010
Heh. Oh boy. Someone should have thought of that earlier XD Ah well. This *is* Usagi we're talking about.
I loved Valiant's solution; it is self-sacrificing but also an act full of hope and life.
Can't wait for the conclusion- mainly, our Senshi reuniting with Usagi
| BlueLion chapter 11 . 7/3/2010
Scatterbrained Usagi, as always ...
Conclusion in chapter 12? Pity, just when it was getting good.
Well done, so far ...
| petiyaka chapter 11 . 7/3/2010
you have really made my day! Usagi wondering on how she will come back to earth... Excellent!