its been a long time but i Hope you continue this story and the saga Not for anything. That serie of fanfics were in my top 3 of fanfics ever. They were amazing and each year I came here to check if you decide to continue with them. I will always treasure them

Oh the things i would do for you to continue with this story. Even though its been over 10 years. I still frequently come back to it and re-read it as it is one of my all time favourite fanfics!

but... whimpering sound*, Sirius and Peter were friends, no matter how hard the emphasize on the "were" is.

OH NO!

Okay so I know this is just a fanfiction and you probably didn't take this into account, but this makes me hate Dumbledore even more :(

He can read minds.

This means he knows Sirius is in an abusive home, and also knows that they didn't even do it, and yet he STILL suspends them

okay so Peter is rlly annoying me in this lol, like yeah i get what he's feeling, he's 11 and from a poorer household so he would naturally assume that Sirius has a perfect life since he's rich, but it still anoys me lmao. I'm really looking forward to when Peter finds out what's going on in later years, like just HOW bad it is. Though he should've probably figured out by now that Sirius doesn't "brag" about his family, and he REALLY doesn't get along with them SO STOP ASKING OMG

anyways i just wanted to say that I can't wait until Peter finds out what's going on and realises he was wrong (hopefully lol)

Wowowowowowow

This whole thing has been ABSALOUTLY amazing and I honestly can't find anything to critique. There are LOAADSS of things I love, and I never really noticed any spelling mistakes or anything (though i am awful at that so I wouldn't be surprised if I just assumed you were right anyways lol)

I really love Sirius' relationship with Andromeda! It's EXACTLY what I imagine it as, and Sirius' relationship with his parents! Well i hate it but that's kind of the point isn't it? I also like the start where Peter mentions her and Ted, idk i just like that bit alot.

Peter just riled me up some of the time, but other times i felt awful for himlike this kid's going through so much, but i feel like some of the comments he made to Sirius about his parents, and how he thinks of how Sirius is rich so he should be happy with his family, disregarding any oher things that could go wrong. I mean I do need to cut him some slack, he's an 11 year old who has a bad family life and doesn't have much money so he probably thinks Sirius has it perfect.

I really like when James and Sirius get into trouble and Mr Potter tells them off and Sirius is scared. Like I think Sirius' reaction is pretty much perfect. And how it was described as his mind knowing Mr Potter wouldn't hit him but his body couldn't keep up is just perfect. I think you did a brilliant job.

Also, I like (well not like, i just think you did well) when the kids get the cane. Like it wasn't too overpowered (thats the wrong word but i cant think of the right one lol) but it's also fairly realistic for the wizaring world in the 70s (pretty sure it was abolished in Hogwarts in 1979 or summ).

I ALSO (i like so many things about this lmao) like how Sirius sometimes echoes his fathers words when he's angry or uses blood status as an insult. Like it shows hoe upbringing, regardless of whether he beleives it anymore, still has an effect, and also I imagine in the years going by he will learn to nearly completely erase this.

Love the idea of French Remus, and i like the scene where Sirius knows it and poor James is like . my personal headcanon is Welsh Remus, but this kinda makes me want to headcanon French Remus

I like so many more things but this is getting way too long lol

The only thing I would change is making the Potter's a little less perfect. Like on one hand, I think I like how perfect they are, it really helps to build up HOW bad Sirius' parents are, and him reacting to things they do that his oarents would never do. But on the other hand I think they are a tiny bit TOO perfect to be realistic. Alot of fanfictions do it well by making them spoil him aalittle too much, like letting him get away with WAY too much, never really punishing him etc. but I think this story wouldn't go well with that, the parts about James and Sirius getting told off is really important. IDK, i think maybe give them more flaws. (lmao I'm not very helpful I can't think of any myself-)

IDK if you are still active on here, but I would LOVE if you did a second year. Like you're story PERFECTLY fits how i imagine it and a seconnd year would be perfect.

(also ignore all my spelling mistakes and that lmao)

Wow.
I've been reading this story on and off, whenever I could find the time. I really couldn't find any mistakes. Everything was very nicely put together, and welly coagulated. My absolute favorite character is Remus Lupin, and you portrayed him very well, especially in the later chapters. I love seeing him as a vulnerable, weak, boy when he's young, turning into a mature man when he grows older, kind of bottling up his feelings, only to be opened by Tonks later in his life. You portrayed him very well, and you did an amazing job making Peter actually be a Marauder. I love the many ideas that this story was full of, the many pranks they pulled off. I do think that Mr. and Mrs. Potter were a little too 'perfect', and if I had to change one thing, I would have given the characters more flaws (i.e. Sirius not being able to stand up to the teachers every time, maybe someone else saving the day?) But I do appreciate the fact that they each had their own problems (James Lily, Sirius his family and all that, Peter his lack of love, and Remus his lycanthropy.) Overall, I really appreciate the fact that you gave us such a wonderful story that I just kept reverting back to. Thank you so much for your inspiration and amazing story!

THIS BOOK WAS AMAZING! I COMPLETELY LOVE THE MARAUDERS AND HOW YOU PERSONIFIED THEM! I've read lots of Marauder books but this was THE BEST by far! I LOVE IT

James yanked her ponytail lol

So in 2020, you are not going to keep this story going, right? I loved the story!

I must say, I'm really impressed! So many chapters and new insights, good job, this is splendid!

Recently rediscovered this series and was devastated to see one of my favourite series has all but disappeared. Full support to the author if this was their choice but will keep my fingers crossed that these stories are re-uploaded or somehow make their way back into my life. They are the best depiction of Harry with a living parent with all the ensuing changes I've ever come across.

Oh, this Chapter hit me right in the feels..

I don't understand the purpose of keeping stories up if you've got no intent on updating them.