Reviews for The Marauders' Tale |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The best chapter I have EVER read on this site. Took my breath away. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That scene with Sirius and the puppy was just perfect. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter, thanks. I'm so glad you haven't abandoned this story! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() How sweet, will Sirius eventually get the puppy? Great chapter, update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Peter is a little stinker! haha sorry, I had to say that. literally, i was forced. but anyway, remus mad me laugh so sos so sooooo so much! so much! do you think i made the point? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The update I've been waiting for! Even if Peter is my least favorite, seeing all 4 Mauraders make an appearance in this one certainly made up for it. Sirius's parents are jerks, but (assuming he is being completely truthful about their treatment) it sounds like he really is OK. Of course, it's disgusting that his parents are sending him away to not even live with them because of a little mistake, but one has to admit: it could have been much worse. And oh, how my stomach clenches when I remember what they did to him for getting suspended and imagine what could have happened this time. "Being arrested by aurors was exciting." Don't worry, Pete. Your time will come. Oh the irony of giving Peter the loyal heart... I loved the "let's-give-James-advice-on-women" section, brief as it was. Listen to Mrs. Lupin, Potter! Don't go pulling Lily's hair! Peter can be so clueless when it comes to social situations. A person can be winking and nudging all they want and he still won't take a hint! It's probably his greatest weakness, this lack of social empathy and instead only understanding money and prestige. But then, the British do have a bit of a reputation for appreciating class and overall British-ness more than many other European nations, don't they? So perhaps Peter can blame his problems on society ;) Assuming I'm keeping track of this all right, they're entering their second year, which means this is the year they find out Lupin is a werewolf. Yikes! I've no idea when you'll work that in, but I for one will be looking forward to every Remus chapter from here on out... although I suppose it could happen in anyone's chapter. Actually since it's not a totally canon series, I suppose it could happen whenever... ah well, I want to hear Remus's perspective on the matter :) Lovely update, BottledSunshine |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant chapter! I think I might actually feel sorry for Peter even if he is rather unpleasant, well keep it up! Can't wait for the next instalment! Padfoot197 |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was a good one thanks keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I- How could I- But- I FORGOT TO REVIEW THE LAST CHAPTER! ARGH! I'm so sorry dearie. It's that blasted real life interrupting again. *Glares* It was wonderful. And now for the next chapter (which I WILL review!) Oh poor Sirius! (How many times have I said that! Ah! So that's how they got the mirrors! Oh I love Peter's jealousy! It's just so... real! And that wee line is very telling. "It's okay. I like James and Remus better than him." Awk Sirius is still so sweet about Regulus. *Sigh* Nice tact there Peter. Very subtle. *Roll eyes* He's so awkward the poor wee lamb. Hahahahah! Yeah James. A MANLY scream. We believe you. Aw. Cute Puppy. Oh Remus you said just the thing he needed to... Oh never mind. Poor Sirius. If only Walburga (not even Cygnus!) was nicer. But then... *Sigh* Life's a bitch. Awk Peter got a tiny wee second of love. Well that's something! I loved this chapter, it was amazing. I can't wait to see more of Regulus though (*Sigh* I'm a Black family addict!) and wait for the next chapter (WHICH I WILL REVIEW!) with baited breath |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw i always feel sad for peter and, although i absolutely hate him when he's older, i want to give him a big ole hug :) james made me laugh when he was getting distracted by stuff :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent as usual! Peter makes me itch, he's so slimy... i love sirius to pieces! this is brilliant :) Rocky xxxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() i feel bad for sirius, but i know it will turn out okay eventually. poor peter...always left out a little. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YESSS, an update! I love this chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, poor Peter and Sirius. I still love Remus, and James is still just James. There's no other way to put him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah. This is fantastic! I'm really enjoying this and I can't wait for more! Thanks for writing :D Rocky xxx |