Reviews for Just a Dream
AwesomeAuror chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Stalker Peter? Not exactly what I imagine him to be. Or to do.

It was definitely cute with all the Peter/Olivia action. The overall story arc (save from being creepy) was pretty good. I liked how Peter said he forgave her. But hated when he still left her.

Sometimes I felt like Olivia was a bit OOC with all her crying and overall dialogue, but it was passable. Again, I have no reason to believe that Peter's would break into Olivia's house to watch her sleep (That behavior is strictly Edward Cullen. And I really don't want to go there.) and I have no desire for Peter to start doing that. To each their own, I suppose.
Mochi-girl chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
Dreaming about Peter Bishop would keep me under the covers! And yes, I would forgive him. :o)
HanAce88 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
Interesting development of this part of the story. I'm hoping that you will still be able to continue it. Great start!
ab89us chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
Love it. It's great!
nico78 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
thanks for not being able to sleep and writing this story, it rocked!