|Reviews for Until Soon|
| OHPD chapter 4 . 6/14/2010
wow. you are a seriously talented writer... not many stories can make me feel the way yours just did, i feel as if my life cannot be complete untill you tell me what happens next.
I am dying to know.
this story is going on my alerts and staying there untill the last full stop.
| lilBlueDragon chapter 3 . 6/4/2010
AAAAAAAARRRRRGHHHHHHH! I LOVE THIS STORY! Talk about me having such a way with words...your style is absolutely AMAZING, and your OC with Legolas...oh lord, it is SO romantic! I love the plot, and I love the characters, and Legolas acts just as I dream of him acting, and you weave a rich words together to create a seamless tapestry of fiction! You MUST keep writing...you're amazing!
| Fishy Rainboots chapter 3 . 5/9/2010
I love it so far! Great story line. I love how Eleri is integrated into the Fellowship without being a 10th walker or a Mary-Sue! I have only one complaint: proper grammar dictates that whenever someone begins speaking, a new paragraph is started and that each new person speaking starts a new paragraph too. This organization makes reading a lot easier and gives a story clarity! I noticed this error especially in the first chapter. Great job, otherwise! I am really enjoying it. I look foward to reading more. :)
| Aranel Mereneth chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
this is a really good story! you've set it up really well. however i have one piece of constructive criticism. it would help if you divided up your paragraphs a bit more, especially when there's a conversation, it becomes confusing as to who is saying what when it's written all in one line. but if you spaced it out a bit, then it would be much clearer. that's all i really have to say, you've done a great job at everything else lol. update soon and keep it up! )