Reviews for Surprise Party
Anon chapter 1 . 2/21
Perfect fluff. I'm really warming up to Seth/Nessie.
BelleinWonderland chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Really cute. :) I adore Seth/Nessie, it's my 2nd favorite uncanon Twilight ship (Bella/Emmett is the 1st). It's a shame there aren't more stories for this pairing because they're so perfect for each other, imo.
elanor of aquitania chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Nice and funny. Thanks for sharing.
ShebaBaby chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
HA! Loved the ending! And grown-up Seth can get it ;-)
picksie chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
Great last line.
shadowcatbrat918 chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
That was really really funny! I loved Seth's mini rant at the end and Edward clearing his throat! :)
Pumpkinguy chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
cute little story. You are becoming quite the shipper. Not that I overly disapprove or anything. :p

I mean if there are no seth/nessies on the net to read, what's a person to do besides start a new ship pair?

Poor seth, he got his feelers hurt, but at least she made it up to him. right?
Rose Gilmore chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
That was so awesome!

I was hoping to read some more Seth/Nessie from you!

I feel like this almost fits into FTO more then SHM timeline? Or maybe neither? I'm not sure, but it was great. I love the after effect of the first kiss...Seth only wished he'd kissed her sooner. :D
Democratic Ninja chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
haha. that was cute.
The Good Girl chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
ahahah this was so awesome! i LOVE nessie/seth. would love to read more, amazing job!
sophia666 chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
great disclaimer- and I love this story. It's perfect- the whole planning of the party, Nessie's sweet, neurotic grown-up self, Seth, the ending. I loved how Nessie chose to show him, and how we see Seth showing hints of his attraction to her. and I love how you write these two together. :D
Allocen-Semyaza chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
Is the story finished? Because it can't be! Oh no, no! Not even close, at all. You have to update! Make a second chapter or something! It isn't 'The End' yet! Oh no...UPDATE PLEASE! It is amazing! And Seth and Nessie are kind of cute together. Better then Jake/nessie actually...but who am I to judge? UPDATE!
JoeBob1379 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
You know, I actually really like this! I didn't think I would, but I really do! I might even go search out some more Seth/Nessie fics now :)
chelley0207 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
I like it! It was cute!
rainbowfish22 chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
Love it. Nessie/Seth is awesome. :D