|Reviews for Evolution|
| rakely chapter 8 . 2/21
Please update! I have been waiting a while but nothing ever happens! Please I really like this story!
| Dragonscorch chapter 8 . 1/14
XD So ol' Voldy's a mutant? With angel wings... XD
| dalulzing chapter 8 . 12/29/2013
| Eve-Kataanger chapter 2 . 5/22/2013
So, Hermione is blue skinned, and whenever she screams she makes your hears bleed from the high pitched notes. Useful.
| Pheobe Arocis chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Please continue this fan fic. Its amazing!
| ToshimiOkami chapter 8 . 5/11/2013
Absolutely awesome fic, can't wait to read more! XD
| WhiteElfElder chapter 8 . 5/2/2013
So, because Voldemort used Harry's blood he will mutate as well, and the whole Angel thing is such delicious irony. Can't wait till Harry can unlock more of his own personality and mesh it with his crafter personality so that he can do what he needs to without losing touch with what matters to him.
| Kazeshinji chapter 8 . 4/20/2013
Love it, I'm on the next update
| Phoenix Gryffis chapter 8 . 4/18/2013
Voleemort. A mutant. This thing gets better every word.
| jeffery.gerbermartin chapter 8 . 4/9/2013
lol voldy-angel that is just to funny :)
| ImmortalDreamerOfStorms chapter 5 . 3/1/2013
I was wondering if you could email me this whole story including he chapters you haven't put online yet? Please reply ASAP. My email is my email is also on my profile of that did not come threw. Please? I love love love! This story! And I have a plot bunnie that I'm wondering if you could take up for me? Please please please reply!?
| ImmortalDreamerOfStorms chapter 8 . 2/28/2013
Please please please update? I love your story soooo much! You should get Logan to bring Harry back to the x-mansion as fast as you can...js
| edboy4926 chapter 8 . 2/6/2013
Keep on going
| Arkarian23 chapter 8 . 2/6/2013
Well the first few chapters were pretty good but the last two were definitely sub par. Constant authors notes popping up were irritating, preventing the story from flowing and providing information that is not needed, detracts from the story or isn't useful. Referring to Luna as a bit like two characters from the Dc universe confused me briefly and while I know of them I don't know much of their personalities to really gain anything from that description. In fact I already had a decent impression on Luna already explaining things in authors notes removes intrigue and reduces the desire to read more. After all that there was shifting between past and present tense, something to avoid as it often serves to confuse a reader. While the writing can be understood shifting tenses forces the reader to pay closer attention than normal and stops the story from flowing. I recommend you get a beta reader or two to bounce ideas off of.
| SquiggytheMage chapter 8 . 2/5/2013
good stuff and want more because it is interesting!