|Reviews for Evolution|
| XxAntiSocial1xX chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
This is good! I really like it! Only a few small mistakes like a dropped letter out of a word but otherwise well written
Can't wait for an update, hope it's coming soon!
Thanks for the awesome crossover, we don't get nearly enough of them!
| meow114 chapter 7 . 6/10/2010
awesome start i hope you keep updating this story XD i hope that harry has more then just healing/acid blood/teleporting like having telepath/telekic/pyrokic/ect powers (from other mutants blood like they did with deadpool). i also hope that its raven/x23/luna XD plz update asap
| DoggyPaddle chapter 6 . 6/5/2010
hope raven remembers his life as harry and goes and kills duddly and petunia. wizard stuff like his important possessions might have had protections against fire and the weather so some of them might not have burned. write more soon great story.
| DoggyPaddle chapter 7 . 6/4/2010
sounds like a great story. cant wait for more.
| Fayneir chapter 7 . 6/2/2010
Awesome chapter, the fight between Raven (far better name than Harry) and Wolverine was intense and very entertaining. I'm looking forward to more of this fic.
| Fayneir chapter 6 . 6/2/2010
The escape was pretty awesome.
| Fayneir chapter 3 . 6/2/2010
I really enjoy the experiment/upgrade concept. Anyway, its getting very exciting.
| Fayneir chapter 2 . 6/2/2010
This fic is great so far. While the concept is rather common, I really enjoy X-Men crossovers. So much possible variety.
| silversnitch4765 chapter 7 . 5/27/2010
Great story, I am really enjoying it, hope you continue it. Iooking forward to the next chapter.
| SemenDemon chapter 7 . 5/15/2010
The story is almost verbatim to Omni Black's, but I get the feeling that you will be changing it up soon. I sure hope so, and cannot wait for the next chapter.
| nxkris chapter 7 . 5/15/2010
interesting story. i love that harry now got himself a sister and both of them are similar to wolverine. will laura end up having a secondary(technically third) ability? maybe some form of tracking or mild telepathy? update soon.
| SemenDemon chapter 1 . 5/15/2010
I read Omni Black's story years ago. I am sooo looking forward to reading your story. I'll tell you what I think by the end.
| Flyte28 chapter 7 . 5/13/2010
;oving it well writen with a good solid plot, pls keep it up
| Mistaken 7 chapter 7 . 5/10/2010
This is a repost, I remember reading this a couple of years ago. As far as I can tell it's pretty much verbatim, or at least you've not made any significant plot changes or additions. I like the story and hope you will continue it but some alacrity and speed in updating would be appreciated considering some of us have been waiting years.
| XcrimsonroseX chapter 7 . 5/7/2010
This is an awsome story! Hope you update soon!