|Reviews for Trouble In River City: Old Version|
| JeanValjean chapter 2 . 12/3/2016
He just keeps getting more and more Extratm.
| Jael73 chapter 6 . 11/30/2011
I rally like this one, I hope you post an update!
| Poetlaureate498 chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Great job! Not many grammar mistakes, and the characters were pretty close to the real ones. I was in a performance (i was Amaryllis) of the Music Man, so it's cool to read about what it was like after Harold was released. Awesome!
| The Music Woman chapter 4 . 5/13/2010
It was...okay, but I wasn't too smiley about the very negative portrayal of Charlie.
| Les Miserabby chapter 4 . 5/2/2010
Please please please please update soon!
| Scoobyfan1 chapter 2 . 4/27/2010
Good chapter, you're doing an excellent job in writing so far. By the way, just curious but how many chapters are your stories going to be? I ask because it helps me in my writing by getting a sense of how many chapters people usuaully write.
| Scoobyfan1 chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
Good chapter, good story so far; keep up the good writing; and thank you for the advice on my Scooby Doo story ideas.