Reviews for Castles and Cathedrals Crumble
candy4yourEYEZ chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
~~! Francis is shown as a total wimp too much (well, he sort of is), but it's nice to see a semi-badass Francis. Awesome job!
PinkCatsy chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
Nice. I really liked it.
mistykasumi chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
I really like this! The tone is very alluring, and there's so much tension - very lovely fic!
senyaichiya chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
there she goes with a brand new lover, dancing with him like she don't even care;

well, let her dance with him and let her dance all night long.

and who would've guessed that just yesterday she danced with me the very same way;

well, let her dance with him and let her dance all night long.

i'll find me a new love and then she'll see, someone else will be dancing with me;

well, let her dance with him and let her dance all night long.

let her dance with him all night long; let her dance to our favorite song;

well, let her dance with him, and let her dance all night long...

-Bobby Fuller Four

[too lazy to sign in; it's the cheese hugger here. yeah. hehe.

you did a good job with this. i'd like to brush up on the formatting for 't, though, but that's all right. just me being anal-retentive, i s'pose. mmhm.

good job, babe!

love,

The Head Baka]
Sue chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
SO BEATIFUL!Love it:)
Kira chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
Wow, this was absolutely enthralling. Every detail was described beautifully and it all really sucked you in. I loved your inclusion of fairytales from Arthur's youth and their similarities with Francis. They were the perfect way to describe him. Fantastic job, I'd say this was your best yet. :)