|Reviews for Father|
| Dancer4756 chapter 1 . 8/21/2011
Fit in perfectly into the story, nice job.
| People Person I'm Not chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
This is good, although you did put "her" for "he" at one point...tsk, tsk. :) Pippin.
| Dancer4756 chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Thank you for writing this. I love Molly and she is one of my favorite characters in the book to. I have just finished the last book. BUt I wished the last two books went into greater details about Hatter and Molly after they figured out their relation to one another. :)
| Gemma Prieto chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
i like it but it really doesnt fit with the book...you should try another part in the book
| EdeatheDemonFox chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
That was so sad! I mean if I had just found out that Hatter was my father, I would've reacted the same way as Molly and this was just very well written, so very good job.~
| ThisLittleDeath chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
You captured Molly perfectly. But actually, what I like more is that you turned this scene from a slightly flat rhyming game by Blister and Ripkins into a strongly emotional and, truly, torturous experience for Molly - which it must have been. We don't really get much of that in the book. I like your version better!