Reviews for Forbidden
maximilian7 chapter 7 . 3/8/2011
WRITE MORE! I love it.
worthlesswbu chapter 7 . 3/3/2011
o: WHAT?

WHY WASN'T I NOTIFIED FOR THIS UPDATE? D:

XD. I remember story-alerting this, and reading it a while ago, but I didn't receive a notification for an update on it. Eh, whatever - I found it!

I enjoyed this chapter, but I kind of forgot basically all that's happened before this. xD.

Well, please update!

~PJATOSROCKS09~
All Things Magickal chapter 7 . 3/3/2011
Please keep writing this!

It would be so awesome if it were made into a movie!
Sheryl-lau chapter 7 . 3/3/2011
PLEASE UPDATE! I THINK THIS IS A FANTASTIC STORY! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THXS!
Penelope Anne Neptune chapter 8 . 12/28/2010
WhenDayMeetsDark,

:O WOW! I love this!

Keep writing! Haha.

-Penelope Brewer
maximilian7 chapter 8 . 12/8/2010
MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!MORE!please?
maximilian7 chapter 6 . 12/8/2010
I like Adeline best.
percy jackson chapter 8 . 11/27/2010
Fantastic plz write more!1111111
LauraBerry chapter 8 . 11/21/2010
Awww he better ask adeline! It's soo cute! 3 it!

More? x (:
shingekinorivaille chapter 8 . 11/18/2010
PLEASE UPDATE! That was FREAKIN' awesome!
shingekinorivaille chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
That's FREAKIN' awesome!
Quetzalcoatls chapter 7 . 11/13/2010
great story! i love it update soon!
Kelsey-Short chapter 7 . 11/13/2010
Not to bad, quite good actually. Few Grammer mistakes but nothing serious.

Kelsey
paramorerox813 chapter 7 . 11/13/2010
omg.. it's so awesome! u have to update soon! let the words flow out of u (sry but i rly don't want u 2 have writers block) it's sooo good! it fits w/ the book very well and this chapter was mpov right?

anyways... 2 much of this was a flashback(only thing wrong) :D
Guest chapter 2 . 11/13/2010
It would be better if Perseus was the god of storms,heroes,

swordplay,and just plain even bravery.
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