Reviews for Under the Mask
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 13 . 1/25
OMG! That was a dream! I don't know what to feel about that. I'm relieved that takuya didn't die but I can't help but wonder what would have happened. Great story btw
Guest chapter 13 . 6/23/2013
takuya should hav been taken to the hospital and it was too late that he died
zoe must hav told cryin that wasnt she meant by tellin "i dont want to see u again"
4 the endin it should hav been zoe dream when they were sleeping after honeymoon
Guest chapter 13 . 6/23/2013
that shouldnt hav been a dream
Pheeja chapter 13 . 6/3/2011
gr8 story, i loved it! :)

i was like at first nooooo this cant be happening nd dan the whole divorce thing, and the crash! i did'nt want the story to end this way! and phew it was just a bad dream, i wud hav cried...;D

ny way awsome story, nd this soo goin 2 my favs!

-kitty
digicaptor chapter 13 . 10/9/2010
wow! a wonderful story and the first takumi story i am reading:DD i was so hooked that i read all at once. Nice story and continue to write more wonderful takumi fanfics:D
dingcs chapter 13 . 10/3/2010
O_o It was all a dream? . . .Pfft, yeah, I knew it. I totally saw that one coming. I mean, come on. Heh. Psh. (Zoe: She didn't see that coming.) Hey, who asked you?

Anyway, the ending wasn't just good, it was perfect! I guess Takuya isn't as much of a jerk I thought he was. Damn, now I have to apologize for blowing up my anger on him. (Takuya: *walks in with crutches and casts* I'm waiting!)

Awesome story! I'm glad everything is back to normal and we can all love Takumi the way it was. *thumbs up*
hEaRtBrEaKeR19 chapter 13 . 10/2/2010
All of that... It was only a dream?

Wow, I thought that Takuya's gonna die but aww... he didn't...

Anyways, that was a great chapter...
Curlyswirl chapter 13 . 10/2/2010
I've been reading your story but I only recently got an account.

I just want to say that your story was fantastic. I really did like the ending. It was a surprise; that's for sure.
blackandblood chapter 13 . 10/2/2010
Aw, that was a cute ending. So, it was a dream the whole time, huh? I have no problems with the way it ended and actually think it was a great way to wrap things up. Now that Takuya has had that insight, he won't fuck up the relationship and ruin the marriage. And yay! No divorce! Well, they couldn't divorce since it was technically a dream and they weren't married at that point. But still, NO DIVORCE! And as I said, now Takuya won't fuck things up.

Takuya: Hey, what's that supposed to mean?

Me: It means that you're an idiot who usually fucks things up. But now you know not to act like a jackass to Zoe. :3

Anyway, that was an awesome story and I'm looking forward to your future works. See ya _
dingcs chapter 12 . 9/25/2010
Takuya messed up big time! Now he doesn't get to be a daddy anymore. Well he does kinda deserve it for being a jerk towards Zoe, but it's sad that they're going to get a divorce. Not unless Takuya gets up on his lazy butt and do something about it.

Also, I'm glad Zoe's okay.

Great chapter, I can't wait for the last chapter! It's gonna be a good one, I bet.
RedCrimson chapter 12 . 9/21/2010
Things get more dramatic for Takuya now, wonder what will happen.

update soon please
hEaRtBrEaKeR19 chapter 12 . 9/20/2010
Dun dun dun DUN!

Waaahhh! They're going to divorce... AHH! I don't want that to happen!

What will happen next?

Update soon...
blackandblood chapter 12 . 9/19/2010
NOOOOOOOOOO! NOT A DIVORCE! ANYTHING BUT THAT! *calms down* Okay, I'm good. But nooo! Not a divorce! Oh, I really don't want them to have a divorce. Though Takuya deserves to get his ass divorced for being an idiot and shitty husband. I'm dying to see how this ends, so I'm going to be a neurotic nutcase until I find out! *bangs head into wall* Okay, enough of that. I don't want to scare you away...and I would bribe you with peanut butter cups, but I know that you're busy with school, so bribery won't work. Besides, I ran out for some reason.

J.P.: *walks by wiping chocolate from his mouth*

Me: Well, see ya later and great chapter! _
dingcs chapter 11 . 9/7/2010
Kouji and Kouichi should beat up Takuya for what he did. (Takuya: What? No!) Yes! You're a jerk and you deserve it! Though it was nice of him to actually bring Zoe to the hospital instead of letting her stay at the house, lying on the floor dead and stuff.

Great chapter, update soon!
hEaRtBrEaKeR19 chapter 11 . 9/7/2010
Oooh... Nice job...

Twins... smart? As if... Those two are the dumbest brothers in the world...

TWINS: Hey!

And the most weirdest...

KOUJI: Pfft... yeah, you mean by Kouichi...

KOUICHI: Well, talk about yourself, emo...

Update soon...
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